Wow, I was actually really pleasantly surprised by this. When I randomly searched for AQW fanfictions, I expected them all to be cheesily written stuff with bad grammar and overall nonsense.

This was definitely not what I expected. The story seems pretty awesome so far, and the descriptiveness is pretty great, as well. Overall, I'd say great job! I might just be interested in PMing you about some OCs, if you're still looking for some.

Anyway...Always remember! Better Dead Than Red!

I can't wait for the next chapter, :::;)

Omg, this was so awesome :D You're writing style is amazing and the detail was perfect! I like the characters so far too :D This was so worth the wait. I can't wait to see how you handle Rein next chapter xD Hope you update soon! Keep up the good work