So I don't usually review anything mostly because I don't usually have much to say other than I liked but but take this as a review of the whole series, I like it a lot and can't wait for the next one, I think I'm going yo watch along with the next one because season 6 is one of my favorite seasons keep up the great work its appreciate.

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Ben was far from innocent: He called the alien to kill the insane that Glory made and "clean up her mess." He knew what she was after and never had the guts to do what needed to be done. While he did try to keep Dawn from Glory, it was only to save himself and not anyone else. First chance he got he sold Dawn out and cut a deal with Glory to save himself and the other universes, and ours, be damned.
He was, in essence a sad, scared, and petty individual with no morale courage. There was no way to save him and kill Glory, and in the end, his actions ensured that he really wasn't worth the risk to try.

To put it this way: If killing Faith was okay to save a ticking time-bomb of a vampire that, if let loose, could destroy the world, simply cause he was "a good guy, well, Ben wasn't worth a second's thought. And God knows had Angel died in Sn3, it'd saved alot of heartache!

Again, the Scoobies and their inner demons and doubts are their own worst enemies. Still think though that Dawn and Tara coulda gotten Faith to stay.

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So don't let it get that far. In other words, you send Faith after Dawn while everyone else piles on Glory. Ya got a Slayer, use her smart. Plus you know she'll waste Ben without hesitation should it come down to that and this time, on this killing, Giles will back her to the hilt.
But really, Faith's better aimed at the tower and thus Doc, and hopefully armed (unlike poor Spike)! No reason for Buffy to have to die this time really. Hell, last time it had to do more with the script engine than anything (you notice how Spike is VERY un-badass in Sn5? Doc shoulda gone down. Hell, Xander does better in fights!).

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Howdy!

Like so far how you've shown Buffy cracking under the pressures on her world and how it affects Faith without making Buffy a bitch. Okay, she it being one, but so would most under this sorta pressure. It's a no room for error situation and one that Buffy, frankly, isn't suited for (as she shows in Sn7). No slam on her, it's a role few really are. And to be fair to Buff, it's also unfair the others don't realize it and keep putting the pressure on her to be in charge.
And for Faith to pull the "me or him" thing right then! Not fair either, cause Buffy's right, they need any muscle they can get.
And now it's come home to roost.

Maybe with Faith there they'll FINALLY remember Xander's spare AT-4 rocket left over from dealing with the Judge? God knows I'd long already whipped out the Troll Hammer before this point (like when Faith and Willow went to the Magic Box, WHERE IT WAS STORED)! Funny how the Scoobs forget just how extensive and scary their arsenal really is at this point until the situation is a the wire or beyond. On the other hand, Faith's right: Without her minions, the fight at the tower should be much easier since even Glory can't be everywhere at once.

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enjoying

Ok I get that Buffy is upset and going through a lot but if she keeps acting the way she is she's going to lose Faith for good. And by the way you keep bringing up Spike I'm kinda terrified Buffy is still going to end up dying and sleeping with him.
Things kind of remain completely the same even though Faith is around. Things kinda become a bit too predictable that way. Maybe u should try to come up with some surprises once in a while . You know do something unexpected?

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Sorry for not reviewing earlier, been scary busy.

It seems like the last few chapters Buffy has been almost subconsciously sabotaging the relationship. Much like how Xander did with Cordy in Sn3 (by horn-dogging openly after Faith then necking with Willow) and Anya in Sn6 (by turning into a commitment-phobe. Of course Anya had to push him into commitment in the first place) Faith seems to be pushing Spike in the middle, turning disagreements into blowouts, finding reasons to not spend time with her, and now blaming Faith for Willow's behavior.
Makes ya wonder.

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Howdy!

Yeah, what IS it with Buffy and ambulatory dead guys? However what he did was incredibly noble and the main reason I put up with him that season. Here's hoping Faith doesn't get hurt too bad...

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know i haven't reviewed, but this was a very good chapter! thumbs-up!

I noticed some words in my last review of chapter 12 were missing and since I can't review the same chapter twice... :p

What I meant was Buffy better not kiss Angel like in the episode and remember who she's with. (Or I'll kick her ass...or I don't know write something where she gets her ass kicked...or whatever ) Because Faith has her limit and I'm pretty sure Buffy kissing Angel or anyone else not Faith(but especially Angel) now that they are together is IT. And that Faith needs to calm down before talking to Buffy again, because the situation right now and Buffy's emotional state is not the best for fight. So please I beg you, for all that is holy don't break my Fuffy shipper heart. :(

Oh God... I really hope that this doesn't hurt their relationship. Not when Buffy finally realized what she had been doing to Faith.

Also, I know Buffy is hurting but she better not be kissing Angel like in the episode or forget for even a second Faith is her GIRLFRIEND. Maybe he tries and she pulls back or but come on! Faith is not a saint, she's progressed so much but she has her Faith needs to try and calm down before she talks to Buffy because the last thing they need is a fight when Buffy is not emotionally stable. I know you decide what you are going to do with the story, I'm just a poor reader who is hooked into this fic, and you know, a die hard Fuffy shipper. So I beg you don't torture them(and me) too much. Pleaaasee? :)

your killing me!

i always liked how they just popped dawn in there, nice job!

Fantastic story. I love the rewrite. Please update soon.

Looking forward to more, especially the end of the season :)