Hiya,
I really really like this story. Your character Lola, is fresh, and inventive, and has so many layers to her character which come to fruition within the story so far.

I also really love how protective you've written Brax, his protective nature of Lola is just precious and I think you've captured his traits really well.

Such great work :)

I can't wait to read more!

Wow very intense especially at the end. Hope they find Lola quick and that she and baby are ok. Well written guys

More Bratalie! There has been nothing about them at all, it's like they're not even in the story!

Loved the Heath and Darcy interactions and the pouring out of their is all gown done

can you please update

Awhh the baby is ok and trust Brax to be the one that alerts them to see on the screen. Hopefully it's all up hill from here. Well done Mary and Bobbi

It's always about Lola and Casey! There's never any Bratalie!?

Aw no! The baby!

Great update :)

Can't believe the things Caroline was saying! Praying that the baby is ok

Please update soon xx

That Caroline is really some piece of work isn't she? So much stress for Lola and c the whole family. Great to see this family once again supporting each other. Don't like the sound of the cliff hanger but not surprised due to the stress on Lola. Hoping it doesn't end bad for the baby and it's not too late. Thanxs guys Well done

What a dramatic sad as it was it was awesome to see this family supporting each other no matter what. We'll done girls.I guess more action to come. I wonder how Caroline's conversation with Lola will I may have posted a guest similar review prior to this Well done girls

Arrrgghhh ... I just want to punch Dean in the face myself!

Good update :)

If is amazing when will the next chapter be uploaded

Awesome update! So excited about brat :-)

Casey & Lola were really cute in this, though I did feel sorry for heath :(

Omg .. I can't believe u stopped our there! Please update a soon as you can xx

Naww thanks for the mention at the start :-) .. A review is the least I can do for all your efforts in writing the fic :-)

Enjoyed this update ... Yay to Brat getting engaged! Like how they are all trying to move forward in their own way! Really hope Darcy comes around soon, poor Heath has enough to deal with without Darcy blaming him cause I'm sure he already blames himself :(

Looking forward to what else you have in store for us :), please update soon x