I was excited to see this new story. Ironside is on my short list of fandoms I check at lunch. This is a very well done character study. I do hope you do more!

And you told me you had no imagination! You lied! This is a excellent start. I definately encouage you to write more. It's well written and both characters are in character. I hope you continue. We need another Ironside writer and it looks to me like you could be it! Great job!

FINALY! Gee that's great. I just can't withstand the temptation to use one of Ironside's favorite lines. "What took you so long?" (lol)
Oh my dear lemonpig I just love what you did. On top of that I think this is the episode I by now must have watched tens of times. I never seem to get tired of running it again and again.
You know how much Ironside is my favorite character too so I can tell you that you've already enchanted me with this chapter. Please, please, please post soon the next one and... don't underestimate yourself; you do have talent.

Now this is the start of a most promising writer's career.
Congratulations, dear Lemonpig!
And there is surely nothing wrong with your imagination...
Use it as soon as possible, please!