A doctor in Cardiff with a funny little bow tie?! Ohhh wee ohh :)

Muy bueno, escribe pronto, por favor.

great fic!

An entertaining tale, thanks for writing it. I was glad to see you learned the difference between "of" and "have ('ve)" toward the end.

I really enjoyed this story. Storyline is well-made, Sherlock is very in character, and it was really interesting to travel in John's dream. Great job!

This is a great story! It's well thought out and the use of John's dreams gives the story a lot of powerful emphasis on his serious injuries and coma.

There were several spelling and other errors. They distract from the story. But do continue writing. You have a great talent!

Beautiful ending! ;) V.

A great ending! I liked Sherlock's try at druging Mycroft, that was so funny! Also, the explainig of Sherlock's motivation, that he didn't intend to kill Shawn was good, it cleared things. Hope to see more of your work here!
Arty

The conttrast between the Bart's rooftop and this one were so great, Devel vs angel, black coat vs. white. I'm glad the killer is cought!

Ah... the missing coat explained! Sherlock is deviouse, cool!

I LOVE THIS! So much!

Awesome story, especially the final confrontation with the baddie...would have been effin funny if Mycroft had drunk that tea...hehehe

Excellent end to an excellent story - thank you! I shall be re-reading it I'm sure!
JAL :)

Well I thought it was marvelous! And I so enjoy the witty banter between Mycroft and sherlock *lol* great job!

well done! I would not have known it was your first at Sherlock. Love the text from Sh "Get your own frineds"- sums up his relationship with Mycroft well.