I really like it;) Good work^^

Oh... interesting ending. There was a good mix of romance, humor, and general feel-good-ness. I liked your story. -_~

so good! so cute and innocent! i loved it! plz write more!

aah SO KAWAII! BUT UMI GOES WITH ASCOT I TELL YOU ASCOOT!

HAHA
KAWAII!
^^ CAN'T WAIT TILL U WRITE MORE!

Great job ^^ I like this fanfic. Geez I don't know that Lantis know how to "kiss" Hikaru ^^ Hehe.. I'm waiting for your next fanfic.

Write more!!! Write more!!! I love the fic. You can't leave it there

keep writing write more I wanna hear the rest!!!!!

it was fabulous!! *clapping her hands* very fabulous... such a romantic story and i love it they way you arranged the story... ^_^ hope to see another chapter soon!!!

Great fic! Big H/L fan, I have my own Lantis. Same hieght same hair.

I love it!! Expecly the comparison of the lemonade and their relationship. Keep on writing!
I'll be looking for more of your stories. ^.^

Awwwww...that was so cute! I'm a big fan of H/L stories ^^ hehehe I even found my own lantis (same height too)^^;;;;;;; Ah well that was really good and really cute ^^ Kawaii!!!
-Ja ne-
Hikaru-chan

Nice but it kinda lacked some fluffy moments. It is very rare to see L+H centric fics out there in FF.net land. Most are about F+F and Umi paired up with either Ascot or Clef. Not that I don’t like them. It’s just that I like L+H better and the others can get tiring.

OH MY GOSH! I'm a real big H/L fan. I mean, I've read cute and fluffy before, but THIS....! THIS is GREAT! I would seriously enjoy it if you made a sequel. Plus this story helped to inspire me with my fic Magic Knight Rayearth 3! Thanks, and please write a sequel!
~Yunari-San~

i like the story so far, you should keep writing