Hey, That was good real good. Kepp up the good work. Cya.

-Hermione

Yes, you do need a spell checker, but I still understood the words! Really good for your first romance! :) Bye! Lira

I really liked it, but it kinda moved WAY too fast. It was good, though.

Weeeee this was cool! *is playin' with a boat tubtoy* Toot toot! Good story! *pushes little boat around then notices everyone is watching* Um, keep writin'! Er and this, it never happened! *points to tubtoy then erases everyones memory*

Spellcheck needed... plot needed... description needed... grammar check needed... punctuation needed... and as for the author? Some self esteem needed! I doubt anyone's going to KILL you over this!

*smiles* A little editing would not have gone stray, the romance sprang way too quickly, but despite this...I am intrigued...it's definitely very romantic and very sweet. I'm giving it 8.5, I just don't know about the change from funny Pokecomedy to lifechaning passion. I know it is sounding that I don't like this, but I really do. It's adorable! I think you defintely have a future in romance, and I actually think the title was quite good, it sounded all romantic and Eastern...aww...

Great! Maybe if you put some paragraphs describing the situation would be nicer... hehe... Great fic though!

i see... very interesting... fast for my pace but it was okay. more action.

That was really good!

short. cute, but short. next time make it longer! oh well...great job!

Awwww... that was cute! Yaaaaaaay!

I KNOW IT WAS SHORT! DON'T KILL ME!