I love your story so far and would like to submit an oc
Name Annabelle Lee

Age 14

Appearance she has short chin length black hair with a blue streak on the front right side, she's very short about a foot taller than Luke and very pale with dark grey eyes. She normaly wears black band tees with various American and British rock groups on them with black skinny jeans and combat boots.

Personality
She's very shy but hides it behind a tough girl exterior but underneath the exterior she's very kind person though she rarely shows it to people she doesn't know well. She is very afraid of most people though she covers it well.

Past
Her past up to age eight was very normal she was raised in America by her parents with her siblings but everyone but her died in a house fire and she was taken in by her wealthy English Aunt. After what happened she tried to isolate herself from others but her insistent aunt forces her in to public event.

Great idea!
My OC:
Name: Ivy Cameron
Age: 15
Looks: Short height, Long wavy blonde hair, Bright blue eyes.
Clothes: Tends to wear dresses and boots, loves necklaces.
Personality: Completley Nerdy, Creative, Loves drawing, obsessed with Harry Potter and Team Starkid.
Other: Has a British Accent.

I like the idea for this story!
My OC
Name: Ivy Cameron
Looks: Bright blue eyes, short, long blonde hair. Usually wears dresses and boots.
Personality: Nerd, British accent, obsessed with Harry Potter. Quite creative and love drawing.
Hates most modern stuff (e.g. Justin Bieber, One direction, the twilight saga).
So... Yeah!

I LOVE IT! Super cool! Update soon, please?

NO! I love it!

I would love to see Emmy in it!

my oc;

name- Maylyn Brushyn
age- 12
Gender- female
Appearence- Old, pale blue swirly dress, Slight light blue heels, Blue eyes, 3 little blue pearl earings, blue ring. In one word- Blue
Personalitly- Old, ladyish, but not nothingish like Flora, loves adventure
Background- Turns out to be Luke and FLoras futare granddoughter

ANd your writing is just the right size!

Did you draw the person in your avatar?O_O

The fic could use a beta. There are a lot of missing spaces, causing stuff to mix together, and some stuff that should be there isn't.