Do I sense a hint of ICO symbolism? I look forward to reading more!

Interesting, well written prologue! I look forward to reading the rest!

Beautiful chapter it made me tear up at the end :) please continue

Whoa, so they knew each other early?
Hmm... That is indeed interesting.
The chapter was simple, but pretty. I'm sure it helped develop their relationship once more, but It also lead towards the tragedy, because the closer they get, it's another step to the events of the game.
Still, I hope to see their beuatiful moments togheter before the tragedy happens. Keep up with the good Job!

This story is really interesting! I am truly liking the way you're picturing the events before the game, I want to see what happens next. Good Job!

Wow your writing is beautiful everything flows so nicely! I'm eager for the next chapters!