wow... Let's see, well thought out story line... definate props for that. But, I can't stand Darien with anyone other than Serena! (Prob. like most people) But I'm not bashing. The story was good... content, everything. I just didn't like the plotline! :)

India, wow, the drama unfolds! You are very gifted at telling a dramatic story. I can't wait to read more. :) I just finished this chapter (ch. 6). It's cool how you are invovling the kids in the story as well.
-Reina

i think its a great story. i love how you have mixed ideas from the show with your own ideas and charecters. it blends together wonderfully to make a story that keeps you reading for hours on end.

O.O i like this, it is very good, i hope u continue with a sequel, please contiue

India,
I have read up to chapter 6. I like the way you weave in scenes and keep the reader on their toes. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to finish it. :)
-Reina

I loved this fic! It was really well written. I'm not to fond of Darien in here though. I like Darien and Serena happy ever after fics. LOL. I'm just a hopeless romantic. Otherwise excellent.

I loved it and I also hated it if you know what I mean.

Cathrerine

This is the coolest non-yaoi Sailor Moon story ever!! This is the SHIBBY SHIZNIT! (XD) Yes India, I said it...shibby...shiznit. Now I feel bad that it took me this long to get around to reading it...I shall never doubt you again. Maybe. XD Muchos Luvos! =P

Is your real name India, or do you just like it?
my real name is India.

DARIEN IS A LITTLE @$$#*!& ! HOW COULD HE DO THAT TO SERENA! SO WHAT IF THE PAST WAS DIFFERENT! all those days of "serena i love you," and then suddenly "oh i dont love you anymore i love the new girl that i met in my past life even though i know it will kill you and ive always thought of rini as my daughter that we would raise together all our lives happily without any other loves" I was about to cuss him out through the computer!

hi i really like your story but i can't get chapter 5 so could you email it me so i can finish the story please i really like it thanks!
melodystar

I read this entire story and I think it is marvelous and spectacular. In my mind there is truly no way to describe this awesome this story is.

I thought it was very good, maybe some editing, but other than that it's good! I'm actually hooked!

Michelle

As always Neo you are a shining star, I look forward to joining forces with you if you will let me. You have my address so please write me. I am hoping that we will have a computer at home so that we can talk almost constantly.

India,
as always the story is a huge success I would like to join forces with you and Meshala in combining our stories together. I have a file for each of us on Sailor Moon.com so let's swap some ideas. can you tell me how to upload Knight Thunder into this?