| Reviews for Damage Done |
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orlando switch 10/9/12 . chapter 3When I see your name I always think of Love, carefully folded which is one of my all time favorite stories. And here you have done it again: portrayed both Snape and Hermione in a vulnerable way, caring for each other but not really aware about their mutual feelings. I like the balance between their slow inner change and the events that happen outside them and around them. And I'm really looking forward to your updates twice a week! |
Guest 10/9/12 . chapter 3 So the coffee just fell "accidentially" in Viktors lap? It's good Snape seems to be able to wield some magic but he still must have some blocks between himself and his magic if he didn't felt it was his doing. And I liked his message to Draco, it was such typical Slytherin kind of action (both the hex in hindsight and his note). I hope Draco wants to get in touch again. He needs some help to get his funds back if he don't want to involve Potter. - I must say this made me wondering where Minerva is in this whole story, or other former Order members like Kingsley. - One question though, you said one chapter earlier they had to go to the ministry and his healer appointment and we only have seen them go to Gringotts and his healer. Was the ministry appointment not interesting? |
Guest 10/9/12 . chapter 2 Okay, now they have 3 things at hand: restoring Snape's magic, his acces to his funds and Draco... Interesting. You know, it's so nice to read a well written and interesting story that every line is a treat. |
duj 10/9/12 . chapter 3I had no difficulty imagining multiple situations where he wouldn't be happy in a bookshop. With all her admirable qualities, she doesn't seem to have grown in creativity or flexibility of mind since canon. Krum in DH seemed spoiled by his fame, I thought, where three years earlier he'd seemed burdened by it. She's probably better off without him. |
1.1.1.1.nolongerinuse1.1.1.1 10/9/12 . chapter 3Great chapter :) |
Guest 10/9/12 . chapter 1 LOVE it! Wonderful to read a new story of yours. |
Shiv 10/9/12 . chapter 3 Well I think he's solved his magic block there! |
sweet-tang-honney 10/8/12 . chapter 3great story |
sweetpdea 10/8/12 . chapter 3WOWS! |
Teddy Radiator 10/8/12 . chapter 3I'm looking forward to where this story will progress, and judging from the trajectory and your writing skills, I highly doubt I'll be disappointed. You've given us a very well rounded, someone grounded Severus, a smart, funny, loyal to the core and sexy Hermione, and an antagonist they can both fight - the Wizarding world. I like this Severus; I have always believed that, had he survived, he would try to find his own way into the world and leave his rancor and bitterness behind - if the world would let him. I'm going to enjoy seeing him grow stronger. Thank you for sharing. |
lovealan 10/8/12 . chapter 3 Enjoying your story, please upate soon. |
RCLaurent 10/8/12 . chapter 3I like this story more with every chapter. |
Guest 10/8/12 . chapter 3 Hehehe, yes yes, of course... The coffee just accidentally fell in Krum's lap, mmmyep. :3 |
TycheSong 10/8/12 . chapter 3Oh, I'm so glad to see an update so soon! I'm enjoying this so much. I hope to see more again shortly. Please? :-D Thanks so much for sharing! |
TessLouise 10/8/12 . chapter 3Love it - no more Viktor? :) |