|Reviews for Battle For Beacon Hills|
| Guest 5/20/13 . chapter 15
I love your stories please make more chapters of this story!
| Catherine 3/29/13 . chapter 15
Interesting turn. I'm not a fan of bringing someone back from the dead, very unclear of where you are going with this, but I do like the part where Chris is finally helping out. He is such an asset to eliminating the alpha threat.
| Catherine 3/28/13 . chapter 14
I like that Derek is always available to catch Stiles as he swoons. ;) Maybe they can cuddle soon, or at least hug?
| Catherine 3/28/13 . chapter 13
...and Derek to the rescue! And Derek and Stiles are not mad at each other! What a win! I'm surprised Chris didn't come and aide in the fight... we ALL know he probably keeps guns and weapons and such in his car and on his person
| Catherine 3/28/13 . chapter 12
Eeek! ...And Derek to the rescue?...hopefully? He just has to face his fears and confront Stiles... and maybe they could hug? ;)
| Catherine 3/28/13 . chapter 11
I'm glad Stiles is not a werewolf, I feel that even though he is awkward now, he will grow and learn and change into something powerful. I wish he would tell his dad though. I hate how all these secrets are splitting them apart.
| Catherine 3/28/13 . chapter 10
I hope Stiles doesn't become a wolf... that would be... wrong. Stiles wouldn't be Stiles anymore... Aw, shit
| Catherine 3/28/13 . chapter 9
I'm glad that Erica planted the seed in Stiles' mind about a possible attraction between him and Derek 3
| Catherine 3/28/13 . chapter 8
I really liked how your story is coming together. I especially liked when Allison and Derek had their private talk. It felt good for them to both be on the same page and for Allison to show her support toward Derek. It not only surprised Derek, but it surprised me too. :)
| Catherine 3/28/13 . chapter 7
You wrote, "Sheesh, could you be more gentile?" Did you mean "gentle"? Because "gentile" doesn't really fit the context.
I liked Stiles' and Derek's partner costume, cute idea.
I hope that bitch dies, slowly and painfully, whimpering in pain and choking on her blood, suffocating, as she watches the Hale pack win.
| Catherine 3/28/13 . chapter 6
His dream was very elemental, witchy. I'm angry that Stiles is the only one to given concern about Derek; the whole pack should support Derek! And of course Stiles would pick up on it and support Derek because Stiles naturally is a loyal supporter and wing man. I wish the pack would not only bond with each other but with Derek as well
| Catherine 3/28/13 . chapter 5
OOOOooh, a threat! Grrrrr, I hope that Elena bitch dies. I liked that Stiles help Derek through his panic attack.
| Catherine 3/28/13 . chapter 4
I like that the pack is bonding and all instantly responded to the twin's presence. Kill Allison? Lets see them try
| Catherine 3/28/13 . chapter 3
You wrote, "Isaac's trying to Derek a favor by getting everyone together again." I think you should add, "Isaac's trying to DO Derek a favor..."
I like that you have lots of conversation between Stiles and Derek, they spend a lot of time together in the show and I like when authors include that aspect in their writing. Maybe Derek will have to save Stiles or vice versa and there will be more bonding and maybe even some cuddling ;)
Is that slight, alpha girl going to hook up with Isaac? That's what it seems like.
| Catherine 3/28/13 . chapter 2
I like how unusually thoughtful Derek was in the first part of the story, visiting Stiles, but realizing he was busy, left him alone. Very unusual and thoughtful