Man, Ricardo always seemed like a jerk to me. I liked the part where it is explained why Nichol's parents don't give to much attention to him. Keep up the good work :)

Great chapter! I'm starting to like this Imran character more and more! :) Keep up the good work!

That was agreat chapter, i hope you keep it up even if it take a while to write again. :)

OMG! I loved that Nahum has been added to the story! I remember of him being pretty much of a douchebag XD

That's a great way to start a story, keep it up! And don't worry, the battle scenes you wrote are just fine :)

Cool