for some reason it is not letting me review Ch 14 'framed' so i have to use this chapter 1.

so glad you have updated i can't get enough of this story. i can wait for what happens next i hope Leo's father comes into it, but if not don't worry:)

i hope you had fun traveling:)
sorry it took a while my computer is playing up i thought the review went in:)

SQUEEEEEEE! You have no idea how happy I was to see a new chapter for this story. I've read the rest and I just forgot to review.
The grammar and spelling is great, not like some of the other stories on . I really appreciate it.
Your OC is very well developed as a character and thankfully isn't a Mary-Sue, like so many characters end up being.
The plot line is good and interacts well with the episodes. I can't wait to see the rest.
I'm just going to go and read it all over again, it's that good. Happy Writing!

really good chapters:)

the picnic was so sweet even thought it was short but it was effective

i hope you enjoy yourself with your new job and have fun doing it:)

'ti amo' so lovely and so sad

why can they be together? why Verrocchio why?

great chapter i can wait to see what happen in the next chapter:)

aww i really enjoy this story i like how you parts of the episodes mixed in as well and your own story comes out as well.

i hope you update soon i can wait to see what happens:)

It's a real shame that you don't have more people reading this. I suppose that might be partly due to the fact that 'Leonardo' isn't all that popular :P

Anywho, nice chapters :) Christiana is an interesting OC, and the kiss was sweet, but it would be nice to see a bit more of the other three. I know that the story isn't about them, but I'm beginning to miss them a little.

Mmm, I haven't had breakfast yet...and that soup was making me hungry...So, I shall now eat something...possibly even soup :)

aww it is really good i can wait to see that will happen between crytal and leo.
please update soon:)

Hey, sorry for the late read.

They were good! (all three chapters I mean) but I couldn't help feeling that they were just a little bit rushed (especially chapter 4.) 3 was fine and overall was brilliant :3 But 4 and 5 seemed to move a little too fast paced.

I completely get that, whenever I write my stories are far to fast paced can therefore seem confusing, but in the next chapter it would just be great if you could slow things down a little.

Anywho, despite that, I really enjoyed it :D Please do keep going! And I love the fact that you intergrate the episodes in with the story. It brings back some good memories. And I had completely forgotton about the parrot and the whole "Idiot Caruzo" thing...hehehe, that was nice to be reminded of

:D Interesting :D

I'm really enjoying it so far :3 So, please continue! I hope that this review will motivate you to do so

Plus, your spelling and grammar is excellent, which is always a bonus (seriously some of the stories on here are almost unreadable XP)

Are you watching the second series at the momment? Enjoying it so far? :D