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| Reviews for Bluebird |
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   Paper Crease 5/1/13 . chapter 12I think it's better off that you didn't kill Napoleon. After all, if they presumed he was dead, it'd be much easier for anyone to bring him back to life. ...What legal matters happen when a dead person comes back to life?... |
| Justrockzyxxx 1/13/13 . chapter 11 What a twist. Love it! |
| StrikerDaisy 1/2/13 . chapter 10 Oh boy, oh boy, oh boy! ADVENTURE CHAPTERS! The excitement welling up inside me is immense, and I cannot wait for the next chapter! |
| zoozo00 12/30/12 . chapter 2 This story kind of reminds me of Birdhouse by They Might be Giants |
| selenia-sopheria 12/13/12 . chapter 10 Oh, Fondue, you rock. I'm glad to hear that these "weird journey chapters" will be replaced by more interesting ones. I can't wait to see this story start to pick up the pace. |
| ghost83 12/10/12 . chapter 10 Hmm... Fondue bitting them in the -, a word for him. Try having reinforced fangs, by metal, and then do it. And a word to the crew that they don't know, or an idea I had, there is a guardian that becomes the exact equal to who ever steps in. Think Link vs. Dark Link. PEACE! |
| Justrockzyxxx 12/10/12 . chapter 10 They went down a bit quick but apart from that, an interesting chapter. hmm. Yes! :) |
| Angelucie 12/10/12 . chapter 10 Ouch...I REALLY hate to say this, but I feel a tensy bit sorry for Napoleon. That's got to be painful. Yay, the adventure starts next chapter! Fondue is so evil! But I like him for that. |
| selenia-sopheria 12/4/12 . chapter 9 Wow, it must have been hard to latch yourself away from Pokémon, especially the new one. But wow, the suspense in this chapter really got me going! Can't wait to read more! |
| Angelucie 11/29/12 . chapter 9 A history project, Raphael. If you're dead, doesn't that mean it's an automatic excuse? .-. If Charlie feels bad for you, It must be bad. Oh, and thanks for following my story! And It's not just you. Same thing happenes to all of us. |
| Justrockzyxxx 11/28/12 . chapter 9 WOW! AWESOME! ABSOLUTELY FABALASTIC! (that's not a word, oops!) |
| Justrockzyxxx 11/16/12 . chapter 8 um, loo bread? What is that? Apart from that, I AGREE! OMG! TTBOL! |
| selenia-sopheria 11/15/12 . chapter 8 Sorry I didn't review last chapter. Anyway, lots of silences in this one, lol. It's a bit weird seeing Raphael/Marie when Raphael's not even human, but it still makes me feel warm inside. And the insertion of Clyde was random, but whatever floats your boat. Oh! And happy birthday (if that's what you meant by you being a year older)! |
| I GOT THE POWER 11/6/12 . chapter 7 WTH... MARIE IS A MARTIAL ART FIGHTER |
| jazminewriter 11/8/12 . chapter 7 Good job so far! |
