Please continue! This is a really go story!

Hmm it has been a few years, I am wondering if I will possibly continue to read this delihious piece of wrk or should I just add it and re-read again and again - drawing my own conclusions. Very well written and actually inspired me to re-work my own little C:SoTN/W.W saga.

Wheres the next chapter - i want to read iiiiit TT_TT ?

when this gets updated again...IF this gets updated again, I will be one very VERY happy young lady. w

Very nice story so far, I hope an update might occur sometime in the near future. I did notice a few small spelling mistakes. WHEN you wish to continue, I volunteer to be a beta reader.

Old, powerful, and cunning he may be, but this vampire is none too smart. Actually pissing D off is a major accomplishment, but that sort of thing comes with a Death Certificate Guarantee.

Didn't D melt metal in the first chapter by force of annoyance? I can see it now... D (vampire) emits a lurid aura, construct hesitates, gets melted, D continues forward, maybe an afterthought stab to the control box... Alucard doesn't want to be rescued a second time in a row and is figuring out a way out of his bonds, Vampire muses about D's heritage, startles Alucard, Vampire gloats about next trap, Alucard gets pissed off... etc.

There you go, that could be three chapters easily. Just think about it.

Hope to see more,

-Celesta SunStar

Will you post more? I wonder if you will, I rather do like this. such a cliff hanger to be left on. *pout* I really would love to read more TTTT

Good lord I hope you continue this. It's amazing what you've done here, and I can really SEE the way your writing style improved over the years. This last chapter is written in a significantly more mature tone than the first one. I only started reading it tonight, but I felt the need to actually read the whole thing, instead of giving up after the first chapter or two, which is what usually happens with me. I really hope you keep it up. Good, nay, excellent fanfiction is near impossible to find.

You forgot to capitalize a C in the riddle. Going by that would get you Aluard. Other than that, pretty good.

Still a brillaent story since the last time I read it. Are you going to continue with it or is it discontinued? Can you update to tell us one way or the other? If you are goinig to continue will you update soon I can't wait to read what happens next.

. . . . . . . . . are you going to continue this? Please? Pretty please? I so love this chap the best! Alucard being caputred and the bad guy giving little hints of not caring Alucard is a male and would fuck him for their own pleasure because he was a "pretty little thing" -insane laughter in the background- . . . . . . . . god I'm a crazed fan-girl. ;

Brillaint story!

Can't wait to read more!

This is an excellent story! I hope that sometime in the near future you will allow us to reach the next chapter? Please!

Okay...so it's been over a year, yeah? I know that no one reads anymore since they got rid of the pr0n, but c'mon! I like this one! and now you left me hanging? Unacceptable! D: you must write! *has this on favs* I expect to see chapter update woman o_O otherwise I find where you live and...whimper pathetically at your door.

your story is very good! please continue .

i want to known what happen to he'll die in the end.

hey you can check my prolife in may like to join this 's young

I have no idea why I am still up at this hour, in the morning, but I am.

This story is intriguing and very very fresh. Your writing flows very well together, from scenes to dialogue, and its a lot like watching a movie in the mind's eye.

I believe I read this story before, but I've only lately tuned back in and saw more chapters! I have a habit of ping-ponging back and forth between stories, so much so, that I tend to lose track of what I read and when.

I love how you introduced Alucard - and D is in-character, terribly so, that it hurts my heart to finally see SOMEONE do it right.

I've only watched my brother play Castlevania, from its side-scrolling 2-bit version, but I think your Alucard rocks!

You also write battle scenes very very well! Its hard to find that in a writer - usually, some lean more towards a certain style than others, but you appear to have the whole package! Battle/Dialogue/Descriptive Scences/Character-Interaction/MOOD (this is a biggie!)/Surroundings - awesome!

This story deserves more reviews, damnit!

Then again, this story is the epitome of those stories, you know the ones that usually are in the background - those which are very well written, have correct grammar and all-around function, can capture the mood, and yet are shunted aside by more "popular" writings. Screw that. Most popular writings I find, are only popular because of a certain coupling, or god forbid, rabid-fanbase because of poor grammar and restraint.

is like a goddamn mining ground. The surface is all emeralds (not that I mind the emeralds, love green!), rubies, very seldom any real good gems. The farther in you go, the more dark it gets, and you tend to stumble across well-written ones that capture the mood, but even that gets tiring though - usually its the same cliche plotline after another. Then, it gets darker and its hard to see, so its like grappling in a dump weary of finding more useless junk. More farther in, you hit pay dirt - its a diamond, seemingly out of the way, harmless, but stuck real in there. Really makes you focus on it, once you get to it.

Yes, my comparisons, metaphors, whatever they're called, they suck.

But what doesn't suck, is this story. Woo! :D

And if it weren't for the fact that it'd be incest, because they are half-brothers, I'd so go: Alucard/D! Alucard/D! ... Then again, vampires don't really care about all that. Huh. Go figure.

Have a good day - night. Whichever! :D

C.S.