| Reviews for Ice Cream |
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Guest 4/18/13 . chapter 1 In the A/N at the beginning, you were complaining about summer... Please, I'm living in Minnesota and its snowing. In April. A lot. I can't wait for summer... |
Faith777 10/8/12 . chapter 1Update:) |
guestt 10/6/12 . chapter 1 Ayeee, this was hot. Kinky, but obvs hot. And now I want some ice cream oops |
ilovecarlospena93 10/7/12 . chapter 1Awww, this was cute! Just a suggestion/pointer...When Kendall got Carlos to cum by licking the ice cream off his dick, well I think you should have expounded on that. One second Kendall is licking it off, and pretty much without warning, Carlos came. I think you should have described in more detail the blow job. Overall really good story! Keep writing! |
Sour Tart 10/5/12 . chapter 1 Oh my sweet lord That was one of the hottest fics I've ever read You should really write more fics ;-) I suggest a kogan fic :-P |
Guest 10/5/12 . chapter 1 I love your writing. Your my favorite author! You make Carlos talk in spainsh which I love and say papi, and dirty talk. Please keep writing, its fabulous! |