Very good opening. The characterization of Diego and Alejandro are spot on. Zorro is bold and daring but Diego can be rather intimidated at the thought of interacting with Victoria without the mask. As for Alejandro, his behavior and dialogue are very natural and exactly what I would expect. Well done all around.

Most excellent. Love the devil in Victoria.

That was perfect. I loved the fight and Dracula dialogue and Diego was perfectly in character

What better weapon for a cook indeed. And I'm glad you put in Victoria's thoughts, that she'd endangered him. Excellent

Oh most excellent. Loved Dracula here

Wonderful, wonderful story. I don't think I've read a story dedicated to Halloween such as yours before and it's turned into one of my favourites. I'm not a fan of vampire/ghost/horror (either old time or modern) so I never even thought about Dracula coming back to life so the scene with at the hacienda with Ynez was a good (bad) surprise for me, but it does make sense for the genre of the living dead but at least the de la Vegas can get on with their lives now.

Thank you so much for this halloween treat that didn't rot my teeth or add inches to my waist! LOL

Sorry, I missed a few chapters and have to go back and catch up. I read the last chapter this morning and just finished reading the epilogue. I really enjoyed the wedding and all of the finishing touches. You're right...Dracula seems to always come back. The only thing I really miss is the reaction of Alejandro and Felipe about the wedding. Overall, a really interesting and wonderful story. I think I'll go back to the beginning and then catch any changes that you made. I read the ending before I finished reading the rest of the chapters. I look forward to your next endevours.

Well, I wasn't really expecting Ynez, so it was a bit of a surprise. I had a feeling it wasn't the last of Dracula! Loved the ending with Victoria and Diego. And glad you had it at just 2 weeks later, not 2 years! The story wasn't insane. It was great (I like the old timey vampire stuff like this- not the current stuff). Write again soon, so I don't get withdrawl!

So glad you didn't kill Solomon! I like how Diego and Victoria were talking about their wicked feelings at the end. As some of the other fanfic have suggested, poor Victoria was having to fight feeling for 2 different men (or so she thought). Loved the story. Now on to the epilogue...

anxious for next chapters

this chapter has suspence and wonder what will happen next

keep it up you are a good writer

I thought the fight with Dracula and Jonata was well written. I got the idea with out the gore.

keep up the stories are fabulous