| Reviews for The tragedy of Moanna's mother |
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Guest 1/24/13 . chapter 1 kinda stupit, why would her mother want to kill her? their world was suppost to be no painfull! sorry but i didnt like it... |
LuluCalliope 11/2/12 . chapter 1This was amazingly good, but it cannot be a one-shot. It needs to be explored more: the new character relationships, this shocking reveal, and Moanna's transformation. The story feels cramped. Let it grow a little. But like I said, amazing...it even ended on a sort-of cliffhanger. |