|Reviews for The tragedy of Moanna's mother|
| Guest 1/24/13 . chapter 1
kinda stupit, why would her mother want to kill her?
their world was suppost to be no painfull!
sorry but i didnt like it...
| LuluCalliope 11/2/12 . chapter 1
This was amazingly good, but it cannot be a one-shot. It needs to be explored more: the new character relationships, this shocking reveal, and Moanna's transformation. The story feels cramped. Let it grow a little.
But like I said, amazing...it even ended on a sort-of cliffhanger.