Trust Vidia to be grouchy when turned back to normal lol :) I still love this story. :D Can't wait for the next chapter :D

Your story is cute and interesting! Please continue it! I wish to ask if I could perhaps use your idea and character to possibly write my own story based off yours? I will credit you for the ideas and your character, of course. :)

I LOVE THIS STORY!
I LOVE FAWN!

Hahahahaahvidia is frog vidia is a frog ...so awesome PLEASE WRITE SOME MORE I LOVE THIS STORY

OK...THIS IS COOL VIDIA IS MEETING AVERILL...COOL:-) :-) :-) :-)

So so so so so so so AWSOME cool :-) :-)

Yes, it is good that clarion is making Averill fix his mess instead of fixing it for him. Hopefully, he'll be able to fix Vidia.

I really love this. Story and I love how you made him be a majic talent with little back story

Vidia had that coming to her. Good job so far

Ha ha! Vidia is a toad!
Why did that make me laugh...?

He should meet Vidia! o:

Cute story! I suppose the queen not having a talent makes sense. She doesn't really do any of the talents. She's just a ruler or a person that keeps everything in check.

good job, and i like the OC. however, can you describe him a bit? i don't really know what he looks like
keep up the great work!

This chapter is really cute except it has a few spelling and grammar errors.

"Will continue some other time."
"We'll continue some other time."

disbelieve
disbelief

I find out eventually, she thought
I'll find out eventually, she thought(perhaps you could slant those words too, to distinguish it as a thought.)

That's about it. Cute story! :)

Wow! That was amazing! I love the part when Queen Caption says she has no talent!(its flitterific!) next chapter you can write about Lord Milori finding out that she has no talent and he thinks Averill? (Sorry I forgot his name)
Is involved somehow. If you want if you don't its fine.