|Reviews for Lost in a Story|
| lia 3/24/13 . chapter 11
| Baylee1100 3/24/13 . chapter 11
nice i like it update again
| Baylee1100 3/16/13 . chapter 10
That was awesome you made Allen-chan snow white sweet and you should totally add the 14th in the Story so please please update!
| The Homunculi Twins 3/9/13 . chapter 10
Ohhh you should definitly have the 14th i there! You should add him as eithet prince charming for Allen (Disney version) or as the Huntsmen (Grimm/original version)
| Kaite1211 2/28/13 . chapter 9
Wow! This story is quite intriguing, and I can barely wait until the next chapter! Good luck!
| Baylee1100 2/6/13 . chapter 9
Oh please oh please update soon who will be the victim and what will be the story please tell me quickly
| Nightmare-chan 1/11/13 . chapter 8
Update soon please! Is Allen in the next chappie
| Guest 1/11/13 . chapter 8
cool, I dont know the story but its interesting so far, as are the oni.
| Guest 1/2/13 . chapter 7
neat, i like where its going so far, update soon
| Guest 12/4/12 . chapter 4
Komui as Toto was gold. ( But Toto is a Cairn Terrier btw ) Lenalee works well too, she always has some kind of magic footwear..
Kanda should be the Tin man guy - no heart...
| Guest 10/16/12 . chapter 2
ookay so it doesnt have to be Alice in Wonderland? Tinman could work then, the whole doesnt have a heart thing, though he is probably better off without one...
dont really know fairytales.. what about a take on the grim tales where its all violent and backwards (like the wolf kills the woodcutter in red riding hood - way better )
You could look up some Japanese or Asian fairytales/stories that he could be from, which would be cool. Like the Monkey King! Sorry Im not much help
| VioletAngelExorcist 10/8/12 . chapter 1
Kanda could be the Queen of Hearts...
| Guest 10/6/12 . chapter 1
This is quite random! In a good way, I mean! Suggestions for Kanda, well I obviously dont know what characters are taken already, but maybe one of the White Queens Knights? The Jaberwoki LOL . Mad March hare ( he is a bit crazy after all...)
I can't rememeber any more characters for now...