|Reviews for The Undiscovered Country|
| lifeisaboutchange 12/28/12 . chapter 11
Holy cow. Zod was one sadistic bastard.
Well done, yet again, with the pace and the plot. I am truly impressed.
Zod and Tess interactions made me smile. The conversation taken from the show, the burning of Tess's face, it was wonderful.
| lifeisaboutchange 12/28/12 . chapter 10
Chloe! Ah, well, it's not like I was expecting her survival or anything. :(
I like that Tess is reminded of Emil. She's been a bit preoccupied, but he's still alive and he is the safest ally for her to have.
A Zodess alliance! Uh-oh! This'll be fun to read :)
One of the things that I've picked up on (and am impressed with) is Tess's change of character. It isn't drastic or a complete one-eighty; she still cares about Emil and Oliver, but she's starting to have thoughts that she didn't have before the Games, about killing her Alliance before leaving and only stopping, not because she had grown to respect and admire these people, but because the cannon would wake the other two up if she tried. It's very interesting, and I look forward to see how far she descends in this battle.
Fantastic work, once again :)
| lifeisaboutchange 12/28/12 . chapter 9
Ooooh, yippee! I was hoping your inclusion of Reagan would spark a scene reminiscent of "Power!" :) Good job! These "Games Chapters" are really well-written. I was wondering how quickly it was going to move along, only because I feel like writing something like this, where there's so much action in such a short time, and then larger pieces where they're talking and bonding and no "action" is happening, would be hard to get a good rhythm. But you've done quite well.
You still have a few (and it's a really small "few") grammatical errors and spelling mistakes. It doesn't affect the reading of the story though, and that's what's important.
Lois/Clark bickering! Hilarious! I cannot wait to see what happens between these characters.
| lifeisaboutchange 12/28/12 . chapter 8
I am so sorry it has taken me so long to read/review! I had an injury that prevented me from being able to type, and I didn't want to read without being able to review! Lame excuse, I know. :)
Anyway, great chapter once again! The Games have begun! You managed to capture Tess's fright extremely well. And the Tess/Chloe/Clark/Lois team up is fantastic! And I like the fact that they decide not to team up with Lexana.
Bahaha the Watchtower reference made me laugh. :)
Well done, once again!
| Cat1030 12/21/12 . chapter 18
I absolutely adored this. Seriously amazing ideas and characterisations and plot twists and love stories :D Literally so so amazing :)
| lilbit4 12/10/12 . chapter 18
You do very well with Tess abd Oliver stories please don't do one with her and Clark
| Guest 12/10/12 . chapter 18
Yupi! You gave us what I wanted! The epilogue with the world free from Games. Thank you:) that was a very good and well-written story.
I love the line: We fight, we spin away in fury and make love with passion.
| clarkfan325 12/10/12 . chapter 18
Great ending to the story. I'm glad that you made the ending your own and that it didn't exactly folow the book.
| C. S. Tolkien 12/5/12 . chapter 17
You could a Clark/Tess pairing fanfiction as well?
| LanaaLuthor 12/5/12 . chapter 17
Wait... wait... they commited suicide? Are you kidding me?!
And if they didn't... have you thought about wiritng an epilog after Katniss saved them all? That would be nice to read about, the world free of the hunger games, of course, if you out them into that story:P
| ThornLeaf 12/4/12 . chapter 16
GREAT CHAPTER! Wow, I thought it was the last one but it's TBC thank goodness! Tess out of the arena was PERFECT, equal parts glad to be alive and the survivor's complex. This is amazing, amazing, amazing! Oliver is a bit vapid though? He always was, he hasn't really changed, so I guess it's a sign of how much Tess has changed. Anyway perfect chapter, you're excellent :)
| ThornLeaf 12/4/12 . chapter 15
Good chapter (suicide thoughts! finally! I was so surprised Katniss didn't think of it at least once prior to the ending). It was a bit brief though? Lex came out of no-where and it was a short battle, but it worked.
| Red 11/29/12 . chapter 16
Yay she's alive! And that dress is amazing! Great chapter, I love the kiss with Oliver it was really beautiful!
| LanaaLuthor 11/29/12 . chapter 16
That was a very well written chapter:) I love the relationship Tess has with Ollie. Hope you'll keep going and that this is not the ends yet
| clarkfan325 11/29/12 . chapter 16