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| This Account Is So Old Wow 2002-12-22 ch 1,  | abuseThat' so sweet. I hope you finish 'Deception' soon. I'm really looking forward to that sequel |
| Christina G. 2002-12-22 ch 8, anon. | abuseWhat a great story! the ending was a blast! Please do a sequel about Vegeta and Bulma. some of the other B/V stories posted on this site have been kinda lame. but yours are realy good. so please do the sequel! Sorry i didn't review the other chapters. this story was so good i just wanted to go the next chapter right away. |
| Kahlan Nightwing 2002-09-27 ch 8, anon. | abuseYes, sequel good. B/V? Right after Deception? Oh! Something to look forward to! I think this was a little hurried, but if you worked on Deception as you worked on this, I can see why. I just couldn't--see eveything, but I really like how you portray Kakarott and Vegeta's relationship. |
| speedy 2002-09-15 ch 8, anon. | abusegood story please finish the deception |
| illegiblewriter 2002-08-04 ch 8, | abusethis is great! you should really consider writing a sequel! |
| Lady Nightshade 2002-08-02 ch 8, | abuseinteresting |
| Snake2k3 2002-08-02 ch 1, | abuseGreat story and finsh |
| Debido 2002-08-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhat can I say about the entire story - almost flawless... |
| Snake2k3 2002-08-02 ch 4, | abuseGreat story and will you make a squeal? |
| Lady Nightshade 2002-07-31 ch 5, | abuseinteresting |
| Lady Nightshade 2002-07-25 ch 4, | abuseCool |
| Bo 2002-07-23 ch 3, anon. | abuseI really hope u update soon um... Make the rating higher put some B/V in Their too. email me when u update bo |
| Ren-chan 2002-07-23 ch 3, | abuseOMG OMG OMG!! this chapter is GREAT!!! hehehe i love how this fic is turning out! i cant wait til the next chapter, and its soo sweet how u had Kakarott help fold the clothes then the kiss!! *sighs dreamily* this is sooooo well written i just love it!! its soo better then ne thing i can do!! heheheh PLEASE PLEASE i beg if you.. WRITE MORE!! i really really REALLLLLY cant wait too see what u have installed next!!! i soo love this! (puttin it in my fav list now!!!) XD heheh ja'ne renchan |
| Ren-chan 2002-07-23 ch 2, | abuseOMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was an exciting action scene!!! this story totally kicks major **!! i love how you written it!! i'm soo jelious!! ^_______________________^ great chapter two!! i soo love this fic! ja'ne renchan |
| Ren-chan 2002-07-23 ch 1, | abuseohh!!! this was a GREAAAT chapter!!! ^__^ heheheh i love how you started your story out! i have something like this, it's called Hurtful Lies but its not as good or well written as yours!!! ohh!! i just loved how you started this!! ^__^ GREAT first chapter!! now i'm off too chapter 2! soo gald i found this!! ja'ne renchan |