just finished your second book, it was so good, im going to read the next one now and im sure its as good as the other ones!

hiya
pleasepleaseplease
bring harry back i dont want him to die make him come back and save the day u cannot poosibly think killing harry i the end is cool or sumthing pwease bring him back

pathetic fan begging
sad

This might have already been said, but I think you have a continuity error in here. This Agus guy is supposed to be a Gryffindor 5th year, but so is Harry, unless I'm mistaken...
anyway, good chapter, The tournament was great fun!

I just love the fact that Harry finally has someone to talk to. It's great that he has a sister. I was hoping there would be someone, Harry's age, that he could talk to.
I am having a nother problem reading the sentence below. Could you please explain what you mean by this?
He had a sister. He more than appreciated the fact, he would give his soul for the it.
This is not a complete sentence.

I just love the way you write. However, I am very comfused about this chapter.
First: When Harry, Snape, and Sirius left the Dursleys house he had his trunk. However, Harry left his trunk at Hogwarts.
Second: When Harry, and Snape, left for the train they went to Hogsmead traveled all day and arrived at Hogsmead. I think you mean they left London and arrived there for the evening. But I'm really not sure. I hope this helps you.

wow! well i guess im gonna have to read the next book! you really are good at cliffhangers! hmmmm...

You're crazy!!

hehehe! I'm soooo happy that Sirius is free!! he has always been my favorite character! It's a shame about that half of a soul thind though, hmmmm

Lee Jordan is not in the same year as Harry! He is two years above him!

ok i usually dont review this early but your story is really good! Compared to all of the othr fics I've read, you have extremely good typing skills menang that it is extrermly dufficult to find a typo! Good for you! My only thing is that Hermione isnt in Divination anymore, but I love your stories!

Whoops. I accidentally submitted that review. Anyway, I was in the middle of wondering whether Dumbledore has ulterior motives for sending Harry to the match.

Well, I think you've come up with an interesting concept, but there were parts of the chapter that were a bit confusing. I didn't understand how Harry was at Hogwarts one minute, and, the next, was at the Weasleys. Also, I think it would have been beneficial to develop the Mark of the Ancients a bit more - how did Harry discover that he had it? Anyway, I'm afraid I don't have time to read anymore right now, but I hope read more soon.

-Just so you know, I'm reviewing this as I go along...-
*Laughs* Poor Harry! What a horrible situation he's in! I love that you've created this "improved" version of Quidditch. It sounds quite thrilling, but I can deffinately see why Harry doesn't wish to play it...

Oh the Mark of the Ancients... That's an interesting concept. I hope such power doesn't start to corrupt Harry - it's rather scary to see it appears just if he become's angry.

Hmm... Dumbledore seems a bit out of character. Why is he letting Harry go to the match if the Dursleys didn't approve? Unless he

:'( :'(
u killed off harry
other than that it was a great story well done!

ouchie..... that was a gruesome ending.... liked your story anyways, very well-written. Hehehe i dont want to kill harry in my stories, torturing and traumatizing him's more fun, lol. anyways, loved the story!

This story is just disturbing. Immensely disturbing. Brilliant, but disturbing... I think I made my point...