PLEASE UPDATE!:U I enjoy this first chapter so much, I'd love to continue reading it.

Please update! This is an awesome story!

I can't wait to read this! This is going to be great! Well done with Nny's personality, you really nailed it!

XD I sorta realized the Ciel background with sebastion xP and then I see that it had JTHM one of meh fav. ANIMES with my fav. Comic? Awesome :3 Oh poor Claire U she must feel really scared right now *scratches head* who knows maybe her innocence will wipe off and sprinkle all over Nny :P I'm sure Todd ehem Squee would like her they both seem scared :3 it's fine with the monthly updates I'll be checking in whenever I wish you luck in the NaNoWriMo O

Im not even familiar with the fandom and I still read and liked it. That should tell you something about you as a writer...
-Herobrine is watching, so don't look back
-Rach

So far, I like it. You give good description and you've done a good job at character building your OC. Nny can be a little OOC at times but then again, this IS set after he's had some treatment so he's bound to be a little better with people skills, and I admire your development on him instead of just going for sterotype gore. I'd like to see more of this and I wish you luck XD