Apparently 20,000 Republic Notes wasn't ecnough for the Patriots in this alternate dimension.

As for the fanfiction, I must say I highly underestimated the ability of all the writers on this website. Seriously. This alternate reality is really, really amazing. Although this is short, I loved it.

That's it that's it THAT'S IT where's the rest of it I… oh my god I love but hate it… I love it more though

I love it, but the patriots are trying to help the colonies. The places where you said patriots should be changed to the Republic, because they are the ones doing all the bad stuff. Other than that, it was a really well written story. :)

Love it! I ship jay or dune! Whichever one makes sense! I love how his last words were I love you! Sorry for all the!'s I love this story!