|Reviews for Lonely without You|
| noonsam 11/3/12 . chapter 10
Another amazing chapter. Poor Ayaka!
| noonsam 10/21/12 . chapter 9
Ah, poor Ayaka, finding out the only worse thing than not getting your heart's desire, is actually getting it.
I am (im)patiently awaiting more of this wonderful story!
| Guest 10/17/12 . chapter 9
Best gravitation fic I've read so far! The character developpement is astounding! Please update soon, I can't wait to read more...
| bakayaro onna 10/15/12 . chapter 9
Shu always leaves before he hears the whole story, silly goose. Gotta love him, though.
Brat radar! YES!
Hugs to you and your muse!
| bakayaro onna 10/15/12 . chapter 8
About time, Maa and Ken!
Enjoyed Tachi's thoughts.
Great dialogue with Eiri and Mika and it set up the next part of the story perfectly.
| bakayaro onna 10/15/12 . chapter 7
*shakes finger* Bad Shuichi!
Come on, Ayaka!
| bakayaro onna 10/15/12 . chapter 6
Touché with Eiri's dream! Original and awesome!
I have MISSED you, Moon!
Please post this wonderful story on gurabite!
| bakayaro onna 10/15/12 . chapter 5
Heh... the anime name cracked me up.
Earth to Planet Shuichi - another giggle.
Such a sweet memory...
Loving your thoughtful Shu!
(I try not to leave revealing reviews that ruin the read for others.)
| bakayaro onna 10/15/12 . chapter 4
No, I am not an Ayaka hater. In this case, it hurts to see her in this situation.
Love Hiro. He was the character I liked the first time I saw the anime.
No, Buki is not a MS.
Any yay for Shu having other experiences!
| bakayaro onna 10/15/12 . chapter 3
Whoa! I wasn't expecting THAT!
| bakayaro onna 10/15/12 . chapter 2
A beautiful angst-filled Eiri - not weak but conflicted.
Loved how you brought him back into the room. What do you mean Shu is not your drug, Eiri? Sure, keep telling yourself that.
| bakayaro onna 10/15/12 . chapter 1
What a delightful surprise to find you at the top of the "Latest" here! I have MISSED your excellent writing! You always provide plausible solutions to the 'blank spaces' left by the manga and anime.
Loved your take on what happened with Eiri and Shu after the rape.
Great Shu characterization - he's not an empty-headed fluffball.
| Sleyah 10/14/12 . chapter 9
This is one of the best Gravi fics I've read on the site in a long time. I love your take on Shuichi - more mature, less bratty, yet still true to character. I'm eagerly awaiting the next installment!
| Shadowfox13 10/14/12 . chapter 9
Ooh! Does this mean we'll get to see Eiri do a little chasing/stalking of his own? *lol* Shu-chan doesn't seem to be dealing with what happened to him. Heh, it'd be funny to see Eiri of all people...or wait Tohma or Mika dragging him off to a shrink. *heh* not likely to happen but funny to picture.
| jasblue97 10/10/12 . chapter 8
I have to say, this is amazingly written. I love your style. It's easy to follow, but it doesn't have the simplicity other's do. You're imagery is brilliant, I have to admit, I am jealous.
Strangely enough, you've kept the characters in CHARACTER even though this is something they've never been through before. It's hard to explain, but I can honestly say if Yuki left Shuichi, he'd probably end up doing what he's doing in your brilliant story. Yuki is that same way. I could see him reacting in this way as well.
I hope you update soon, because I can't wait to see where this goes. You're an amazing writer and I'm glad I stumbled upon you :)
Great job, and good luck.