there are grammar and spelling issues.
pretty interesting.

I genuinely felt like crying while I was reading about Nervous. Again another fantastic job.

Hahahaha oh poor John! That was a great episode!

Dustin is a slob so you got that dead on, and I take it the punch to the gut was his still low Aspiration. Well at least Beau believes Dustin, he wasn't smoking pot again. It will be a long time I think before I update big blow my Two Families Connected got deleted half my fault half Bit defender back up and some weird screw-up with Word. Word wouldn’t even allow me access to the file I made the file and I’m the user, what the heck unless my computer got hacked, or something why did it get changed? I have to recover from here and then remember what I typed and what the Lord may want as a change in the story. It might be why it was lost. I’ll have to be backing-up more often now on CD as well as a flash drive USB. Well if I have one thing to be thankful for I got a gift, I can now speak pray in tongues, thank You God! That was some I had on off wanted for years! Hey God restore He might be able to restore the file somehow.

Great chapter :)

Hehe I love Jen and John! Another fantastic episode.

Oooh I like Meadow's development and the shock plot twist of resurrecting Bella. Great stuff!

Great chapter!

Hehe I'm loving Jen as a vampire, and thank goodness Brandi and Darren sorted their relationship. Another terrific installment.

I'm sure he won't mind sleeping on the couch for just a few more months. I have a tofu, he can sleep downstairs.
I think you made some spelling err here, it’s the only one I spotted ‘tofu’ futon maybe you meant?

Let’s see Angela weighing herself anorexia or bulimia. Chatting to Grim could mean death or trying to use the Grim Phone, see if Bella can be brought back. Nina crying, pregnancy hormones! Or she has second thoughts about killing the baby but by now it’s probably too late.
Happy Easter, Jesus has Risen, yay!

Great chapter! I'm glad that Brandi finally told Darren how she feels for him.

Yes the duo were properly punished and Mary Sue left that man! Well done on another marvelous chapter!

Lolo now that was interesting that ending, now Jennifer just got interesting, that’s just funny to me! If John is still that desperate he can always adopt!

Great chapter! At least Don and Dina got what they deserved.

Awww that was good! Update soon!