I have to admit this is my favorite fanfiction so far, not because of its lenght, but because it adresses Mavis as a vampire who succumbed to her dark nature, while still a part of her care deeply for her lover, Jonahthan. I'm very anxious what will happen next, will Mavis be able to overcome her bloodthirstly nature? What does Harriet want with Mavis? What will happen to Jonathan, will he submit completely to Mavis, surrendering his life and blood to her, or will he ask her to turn him into a vampire? So many possibilities here... I beg of you, please update whenever you got enough spare time and inspiration, you've got great potential as a writer.

Plz update. Its a really good story.

You update right now. I absolutely love this story and the darker take you've given it. PLEASE UPDATE!
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please, continue the story! I love it!

Very good I am enjoying your story its an amazing idea andd well written I'll follow and review when I can and feel free to PM me I honestly want to connect with more authors of your skill so I'm just a PM away

can i give you a date to make the next chapter? how about the 22

What's about the next chapter? :)

I have Orange Blood lip gloss from Bath & Body Works. It tastes SO good.

Loving the story so much! You're a very talented writer. My fav scenes are definitely just between the couple, the other characters getting a bit annoying :P

That was awesome! I really think you could right your own book.

Good story! hope u update soon!

Very cool story liked all the chapters and all I ask is when is 7,8,9 and more are coming out?

Wow, this is amazing! Please continue this. It's really awesome.

Oh this ought to be fun, can't wait for when Dracula and all the other movie characters join in ! Please update soon !

UPDATE! I command Thee! :{