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| Reviews for The Promise |
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  Letant 10/15/12 . chapter 13 *arms raised in a V* FOR THE WIN! Vreenak is is marrying puff the magic cheapskate and Bea is dreaming hot things about me. The only thing that would make this better is if...I WAS REALLY THERE! *Glaring at Fae* Make it so would you? Please! Bea...hey Bea...I'm STILL not wearing any underwear...and now... *WINK* I'm inviting you to come check it out! |
 Fameanon 10/15/12 . chapter 13OH YEAH! TOUCHE INDEED! I think it's about time we bring this home don't you my dear! ;-) LOVE YOUR PART! WOOTTTTT! |
| Bea 10/14/12 . chapter 1 *bites lower lip* You talk a good game Letant, but what are you going to do about it? I'm waiting... |
| Letant 10/14/12 . chapter 12 Solok, old man I think I'm up to bat! Looks down at Weyoun, Solok, old man...We have some kind of rabid rat thing hitting on your woman...PON FARR HOOOOOO...Rival go get'm get'm! Beaaaaaaaa...I am not wearing any underwear ;-) and this time I'm not . |
| Weyoun 10/14/12 . chapter 12 *grabs Fae and kisses her ardently* Maybe I should be... *winks and walks away* |
| Fae 10/14/12 . chapter 12 Weyoun, you simply haven't shown up...apparently you don't read Fae's fiction! |
| Weyoun 10/14/12 . chapter 12 I've been idly standing by waiting for my name to come up in this story and now that chapter 12 is upon us I think it's about time I had a say in this. Why Fae? Why am I not a possible suitor? Do not tell me that the half-wit Solok is the one that will eventually win your heart?! *does crazy giggle* I know you have much better taste than that! |
| LORETTA JEAN 10/13/12 . chapter 12 THAT IS SOME END OF CHAPTER THERE. YOU HAVE GOT TO BE HAVING SOME FUN. I SEE SATIRE. |
| Artemis Fortune 10/13/12 . chapter 12 O_O WHY DID NO ONE STOP HIM Forte |
| Vreeknak 10/13/12 . chapter 12 *puts on some cheesy strip club music* Tosses his jacket on the floor...it's Reaaaaaaaaaalll Dances around Tossess his shirt on the floor...it's REaaaaaaaaaaalllll Dances around tosses his shoes (not so smooth) it's soooooooooo reaaaaaaaaallllll Dances around turns so his but is facing everyone, rips pants off and squeezes butt cheeks together...sooooooo reaaaaaaaaaaalll Spins around pulling at underwear...*Fae gets the hook and pulls him off stage* |
| Fameanon 10/13/12 . chapter 12 Life imitates art...I threw my head back and laughed as hard as Fae did! Well done my dear well done! |
| Just a Crazy-Man 10/13/12 . chapter 12 Epic! |
| Taurik 10/13/12 . chapter 11 *looks down at Solok's comments and rolls his eyes* You talk like an antique SoLOK. In fact, I believe you to be antiquated in many ways, not the least of which would be *reads a small card* that if you were to orgasm you would likely fill the room with dust...because you are so old and past it. Fae, please listen to me. My mother explained to me what I did wrong, and I full intend on making it up to you tonight, twice in the morning after my plomik breakfast...Disregard SoLOK, it is only logical that you take a young and viral mate. |
| Solok 10/13/12 . chapter 1 I see that some readers have enough logic to realize that it is only in Fae's best interest for her to come to her senses and accept me. She will not find a better husband elsewhere. I will impregnate her with many children, so many in fact that they will name a new species after our offspring. I await this with much anticipation. |
| Vreenak 10/13/12 . chapter 11 My love, Bea, is not faaaaaaaaaaaaakkkkkkkeeee! I'll show you, I'll even pay for most of our wedding, like a full third of it! |
