Wow keep up the good work!
I was fascinated when I read it, so emotional inside their feelings
I knew it actually, they love each other

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww ww not one for Tear and Guy but it is amazing

All of my feels in this fic! ALL OF THEM!

This was beautiful and I enjoy reading the very few Guy/Tear fics to see what people right about them. This had to be one of the best I've seen yet.

Wow. Wow. I LOVE the way you wrote this. I just love your writing in general. And I could totally picture this happening had Asch come back instead... I don't really blame Guy and Natalia for doing what they do.

"Both of them knew that their relationship was wrong, a twisted, broken imitation of what might have been had their lives been different, if the correct Luke had returned to them that day."

And by the way, I just love how you wrote "'correct' Luke" in that sentence, for some reason. Because there's not really a "correct" Luke, per say, but it's as if Asch coming back was WRONG to Guy. As if the "correct" Luke's return would have fixed everything (which it would have). I don't know; I'm terrible at explaining why I praise what I do. But to put it short...awesome diction there. And everywhere else.