|Reviews for Content|
| digitalxRENEGADE 4/2/13 . chapter 1
Wow keep up the good work!
I was fascinated when I read it, so emotional inside their feelings
I knew it actually, they love each other
| Vannil 12/22/12 . chapter 1
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww ww not one for Tear and Guy but it is amazing
| RubyMoonz 10/10/12 . chapter 1
All of my feels in this fic! ALL OF THEM!
This was beautiful and I enjoy reading the very few Guy/Tear fics to see what people right about them. This had to be one of the best I've seen yet.
| selenia-sopheria 10/7/12 . chapter 1
Wow. Wow. I LOVE the way you wrote this. I just love your writing in general. And I could totally picture this happening had Asch come back instead... I don't really blame Guy and Natalia for doing what they do.
"Both of them knew that their relationship was wrong, a twisted, broken imitation of what might have been had their lives been different, if the correct Luke had returned to them that day."
And by the way, I just love how you wrote "'correct' Luke" in that sentence, for some reason. Because there's not really a "correct" Luke, per say, but it's as if Asch coming back was WRONG to Guy. As if the "correct" Luke's return would have fixed everything (which it would have). I don't know; I'm terrible at explaining why I praise what I do. But to put it short...awesome diction there. And everywhere else.