 Mizuki Assasin of the Mist 2009-10-14 . chapter 24*clap clap* that was ingenius !!I absolutely loved it! XD
This is my second Severus/Sirius fic,but that other one was way worse.OOCnes galore >.<.So this is my replacement as my first ever Sirius/Severus fic!
And it deserves it!!
So totally awesome!
I just loved how you made Snape all sarcastic and whatnot,then he gives in.And in the end it turns out that they were actually in love!!Yay ^_^!
I'm annoying,yeah?ah,well.
4/5 for sticking to their personalities,and having an awesome conclusion as to why they fell in love ^_^!!
4/5
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 countesszero 2009-10-13 . chapter 24i read this story in 2008 and happened to stumble across it again. now i realized that you wrote the whole thing in 2002. does that make you the mother of snack? :D
anyway - it had all the perfect components: a judgemental and demented sirius, a sociopathic snape (if slightly less witty and suave than others like to see him) - a manipulative, twinkly dumbledore.
your writing was so good, so fluent and so sweet!
i hope you are still writing some delicious snape/black stories or even better - original fiction, which you get paid for :) |
 Utena-Puchiko-nyu 2009-05-07 . chapter 24I really this fic. It makes me lough, sad and almost cry. Perfect.
Excellent work.
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 Utena-Puchiko-nyu 2009-05-07 . chapter 23Aw~ I'm so happy now ñ.ñ
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 Utena-Puchiko-nyu 2009-05-07 . chapter 22Aw... so sad u.u
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 Utena-Puchiko-nyu 2009-05-07 . chapter 21Severus ins't Slytherin for nothing XD
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 Utena-Puchiko-nyu 2009-05-07 . chapter 20I'm little confuse now...
I go NOW to read more XD
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 Utena-Puchiko-nyu 2009-05-07 . chapter 19Oh... I don't know what feel right now :S
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 Utena-Puchiko-nyu 2009-05-07 . chapter 18Wow! So intense again!
I need more! So luck that this fic is finish XD
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 Utena-Puchiko-nyu 2009-05-07 . chapter 17Wow! What surprise! O.O
I go for the newt chapter now!
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 Utena-Puchiko-nyu 2009-05-07 . chapter 16Uh, this is so hard to read. I want the humor again u.u
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 Utena-Puchiko-nyu 2009-05-07 . chapter 15Wow! So intense! :O
I love this chap.
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 Utena-Puchiko-nyu 2009-05-07 . chapter 14-sigh-
I don't like this u.u But... whit Sirius insecurities this is inevitable :S
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 Utena-Puchiko-nyu 2009-05-07 . chapter 13Wow! Funny chap! XD
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 Utena-Puchiko-nyu 2009-05-07 . chapter 12Uh... that don't smell very good ;.;
I like this chap.
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