|Reviews for Cyberprepbully|
| tapperbell 6/15/13 . chapter 1
Oh my gosh... FIX THE SPELLING! Please.
I couldn't even freaking read it...
But seriously, PLEASE fix it. I'm just trying to help you with your writing, not to be mean.
| Dah doip dope 6/15/13 . chapter 14
This was the greatest epic I ever did read
| Gray Shadow 5/15/13 . chapter 1
| Guest 3/27/13 . chapter 14
Okay, if you think this story is something to be proud of, then you need a serious reality check, because you've completely trashed the storyline of "Cyberbu/y" and completely messed up the canon (original characters) I mean seriously, your spelling is awful, and the amount of times you keep misspelling your characters names is unbelievable.
Now, I'm gonna say something people have said time andtime again: Taylor IS the bully, not Lindsay (not cool on the "fake bitch" sterotype by the way). Also, your "Goths" are the biggest bunch of posers I've ever come across in my life, and not "tru Goffs" at all like you've been saying. THEY ARE POSERS! YOU ARE A POSER! DEAL WITH IT AND GET THE FACTS STRAIGHT!
And why would ANYONE be jealous of you for writing this? It's so bad it makes me question your age and whether you're old enough to be on here (Don't even get me started on the stupid things you type instead of "hooked up" "had sex" or whatever).
And the fact that you claim to not know who Tara Gilesbie is, is freaking bullshit, because you write exactly (and I do mean EXACTLY) like her, so much so that maybe you are her.
SERIOUSLY, IF YOU DON'T WANT PEOPLE TO LEAVE "MEAN" REVIEWS, BLOODY WELL FIX THIS THING UP OR REMOVE IT!
| Guest 3/24/13 . chapter 14
What the hell? Seriously? The guidance teachers a vampire? And since when are Linkin Park and Korn Goth bands? They're metal. If I were you, I'd seriously do some research because you've mocked Goths (I being one so it's offensive) cyberbully victims (I mean come on, Taylor called Lindsay a bitch because she asked her if she was going to a Hilary Duff concert. What the hell...) and people who have thought about killing themselves. (The dying hair blonde thing was so ridiculous, and Goths can have blonde hair, so black hair isn't always a requirement.)
And also, suicide isn't "Goffick" either. It's an extremely serious thing and shouldn't be taken lightly. So if you're going to make fun of it, expect some bad reviews. Because how anyone actually likes this is beyond me. Maybe people would give it a chance if it was actually well thought-out, the bullying actually made sense (so that would be the girl getting buillied for her clothes, not because people think she isn't a Goth) and not everyone was dressed like wannabe Goth posers.
Trust me, I've seen that, and it was obvious to tell who was faking and who wasn't. And obviously you and Taylor are, because you've painted her out to be the biggest poser I've ever seen. And I've seen a lot of posers before.
I don't actually care what you say, Taylor is a poser, all your Goths are posers, Lindsay IS the nice one, and this story is completely ridiculous. (I still can't believe you named this chapter after a phrase you could tell everyone in the A/N, and don't even get me started on the shit with all the prep hate. Goths aren't elitist, they're more open-minded, and Taylor's about as open-minded as a sealed jar.) But if a story is so bad, like this one, it's GOING to get flamed/hated/removed or whatever.
So fix the bloody grammar, and spelling mistakes and write in proper English. I don't care what you bite back with, I stick to my opinion of this story.
| Oshiro-Chan 3/23/13 . chapter 1
I already know from the title, that this person wants attention just like "Enoby Dark'ness Dementia Raven/Tara Way"
| Yania 3/23/13 . chapter 14
Alright, now you're just taking the mick. I read the whole story, and I've gotta say, suicide and self-harming is not Gothic (or Goffick, as you put it for an unknown and stupid reason) and I read the A/N, and I have a whole bunch of things to say:
1) The whole Atheist/Satan thing is actually really stupid, people who worship Satan are Satanists, and Atheists don't believe in anything at all.
2) The people who review are actually trying to HELP you, and if you can't see that then you're an idiot. Partly because you've ignored their advice completely, and probably in the process pissed off alot of Goths/Self-harmers (for LOGICAL reasons, not your stupid and ridiculous ones) Bully victims, etc.
3) And you keep defending Taylor, but A) You keep spelling her name wrong (and you do with almost all the characters, I swear there's one who flicks between being calling "Scott", and then "Dani") and B) She has done stuff wrong, she ain't perfect, and if you think she is then you need a serious reality check. She's actually been mean, and I agree with nearly all the reviews that have said Linsday is the nice one, because she actually is. I don't care what you say, she IS nice.
4) What the bloody hell is your problem with Non-Goths? (or preps as you call them?) They're just normal people.
5) Last thing, the whole thing about the Goffick revolution is completely ridiculous. It IS okay for people to not be Goths, and that teacher in the "threapy" session seems like a real idiot.
Also, the stuff you've put Taylor through is NOT cyberbullying, it's a true offence to people who've gone through it, especially Amanda Todd, you make it seem like a joke when it's extremely serious. And you really need to fix the grammar, spelling, and well, EVERYTHING, about this story, or at least learn the basic rules of writing before you carry on.
| Xenia 3/20/13 . chapter 14
To be very honest, I don't believe you when you claim that you don't know who Tara Gillesbie is. The writing style, the spelling, the grammar, the goths, and vampires, they are almost identical. Tara also wrote 'My Immortal' and I'm pretty sure you know it, because the first paragraph is EXACTLY the same as the first paragraph in My Immortal. And the names, don't even get me started on the names of your characters. They are constantly spelled wrong, and they have random apostrophes in them. Also, the author's notes are almost the same as well.
And one more thing, why is this story rated K? This is definitely not a K Rated story, due to the language and 'depression' you contain in this story. I'm actually very surprised that this story hasn't been removed yet, but whatever. It's really horrible and you should get the facts right beforeo you start writing any fanfiction.
| DarknessBloodAngel 3/19/13 . chapter 13
Alright, I've been sugarcoating it so far, but this sentence caught my eye and I got mad - "We n da kewl goffs looked at da support group dat was inside n they wer al ugly and preppy so we put our midel fingers up at them and laffed at them cuz there stupid an oversenstiv i mean thers nothin a prep cud b depressed about there just pretendin bcuz they want 2 b kewl like da goffs. Sum of them looked upset and we laffed mor." I'm sorry, WHAT! Nobody pretends to be depressed, and everyone can become depressed at some point. It's a chemical imbalance in the brain, and everyone has brains, so...
Oh and another thing, you make Taylor out to be the victim of cyberbullying, but really she's the bully. It's insulting to bully and cyberbully victims. So I suggest you either fix this story, or people are going to keep writing "offensive" reviews. Me, I haven't, I've tried to help you, as have other people, but if you want to be ignorant, that's your progative, dude. Just don't expect any nice reviews from people you've either offended, or downright annoyed.
| Shevil 3/19/13 . chapter 13
you shouldn't be proud of yourself. This is a fucked up story, and why the fuck did you write this? This is really offensive to people who are actually cyberbullied, Taelor isn't really bullied to the extent where you put her. Just because people do not share the same views as you do does not make them preps.
And if you want to continue this story fix all the damn mistakes in this story. Like all the spelling and grammar mistakes. If you don't, I totally understand. You are only writing this story for attention, or else you wouldn't have made such a lazy attempt to stop people from leaving offensive reviews. You also messed up the entire plot line of the story, purposely spelling the character's name wrong (like in the very first sentence of the entire story), and using text language.
Also, I've been in a Goth phase before. And believe me, I never told anyone to fuck off or flip them off whenever someone tries to talk to me. Maybe Taelor/Taylor should try to change her behavior towards other people before she contemplates why she is being treated so badly.
Also, that leads me to my next point. You made Lindsay the nice one in this story. She isn't a bully. But guess who is? Yep, Taelor/Taylor is the bully. She is being rude to everyone who tries to talk to her other than Samara.
And please, the author's note in this chapter is incredulously written. Your language does not change. You are still writing in plain English. You are trolling this story; you have nothing to be proud of about this story. Nothing at all.
YES THIS WAS SUPPOSED TO BE A DAMN FLAME ON YOUR STORY. IT ACTUALLY MAKES NO SENSE WHATSOEVER, AND THE WRITING IS HORRIBLE.
I suggest that you remove this story or fix the mistakes. It's really horrible.
YOU MUST BE RELATED TO TARA GILESBIE TO WRITE SOMETHING HORRIBLE TO THIS EXTENT. YOU EVER SPELL 'GOTHIC' AND 'GOTHS' WRONG THE SAME WAY TARA DID. HONESTLY, I WOULDN'T BE SURPRISED IF YOU AND TARA ARE THE SAME PERSON, OR SISTERS, OR IF YOU'RE RAVEN (THE EDITOR OF MY IMMORTAL)
This was just my honest opinion on this story.
| Shevil 3/19/13 . chapter 2
you already mentioned that the girl samara was called because of the movie the ring
| Shevil 3/19/13 . chapter 1
Are you tara gilesbie with a new identity?
This story is fucked up with spelling and grammar mistakes, the same way My Immortal is. And we're not preps btw, we are simply ppl with our own opinions. Just... Stop writing and do something ur good at. Cz writings for u isnt the best thing u should be working at.
| Bluehair83 3/2/13 . chapter 1
Yeah, I agree with Lexyrocks. You really have no right to say that about her story, because it's good, understandable, and is actually thought out and doesn't seem ridiculous. And don't attack Lexyrocks, because it'll be a really short argument, trust me.
And we aren't "flaming preps" we're people with a right to our own opinions. Oh, and also, I may or may not have said this before, but Taylor is the bully, not the bullied. And I have been through some bullying myself actually, and it was FAR worse than what your version of Taylor is going through (which to me, is NOT bullying at all, it's a mockery) so think before you attack.
And again, we aren't ganging up on you, just advising you. So it's pointless calling us "preps" because A) I don't actually know what it is, and B) I'll just laugh at all your ridiculous sterotypes.
But this is something I'm calling you out about - Self-harming isn't "Goffick" as you've put it, and it's a very serious thing. So having Taylor do it because she feels like it, ain't gonna win you any points as far as I'm concerned, and I agree with what I said, and that this story is a disgust to Cyberbully and bully victims. Not to mention the dying hair blonde part, it truly is insulting, especially to people who have actually thought about killing themselves.
| lexyrocks 3/2/13 . chapter 1
I can hardly understand ur story at all with all the mistakes and spelling errors. U reviewed on my cyberbully story saying that yours was better then mine. First of all, Thats fucking rude. And you have no right to say yours is better than mine when u have so many fucking errors in ur fanfic. You basically tell the reader everything instead of showing them in detail. And Taylor's a vampire? That kinda ruined it. And she's super rude to her mom. Maybe u should take some of your reviewers ideas and fix this shit before you go trashing someone else's.
| DarknessBloodAngel 2/27/13 . chapter 12
*Reads A/N* We aren't ganging up on you! Jeez, and I reckon alot of people who've read this HAVE been through bullying, but it's actually bullying, not people thinking you're a prep or whatever. Take Amanda Todd for example, or Phoebe Prince. But hey, your story.
And anyway, you keep saying that it's not Taylor's fault that she's getting bullied, only you're saying things like the fact that she's a sadist and things like they.
Also, not many of your speech descriptions actually make sense. "Sexily commanded?" I won't even ask. And if your version of Taylor is a vampire, I'd research some mythology, and make it more realistic, because it just seems ridiculous. And you're trying too hard to make Taylor a Goth, but she's a poser, because from what I've read, you know nothing about the subculture, and neither does Taylor.
Yeah, I get it may seem people are ganging up on you, but they're really just trying to help you make the story better. And you can't automatically assume people don't care about others like you did at the beginning of the chapter, because it's harsh and sterotypical.
I'm really not trying to upset you, but it seems like every bit of constructive critism, or honest review sets you off, so it's not your readers' fault.