|Reviews for Beauty Beyond the Barrier|
| Draconic 6/11/13 . chapter 2
You used Kanako's name without properly introducing her, and occasionally, your diction is awkward. I'm interested in where this story is going at the very least, so I'll keep reading.
Tip: Don't let OCs become main characters under any circumstances. It doesn't matter how hard you try, they won't fit in with the rest of the characters. Trust me, I know from experience.
| Draconic 6/11/13 . chapter 1
This looks promising. I'll stick around for both of your stories for now. I hope they live up to my expectations.
| InnocentDiamond 2/16/13 . chapter 2
Same b-day message as before. Saya was facing the teacher, right? I blame the teacher for suddenly appearing & supposedly giving Itsuki a seat by the door. Now that was plain cold & heartless, Saya. A casual conversation with Itsuki later won't do much. Why is Nene being so picky & skeptical? First time I've seen the twins separated. Reminds me of some of my classmates. Oohh...Saya's going to get suspended for unsupervised magic in student-restricted grounds. Not again with the glares. Update soon!
| Nikkirose and PhantomhiveQueen 2/13/13 . chapter 2
i liked it
| Nikkirose and PhantomhiveQueen 1/26/13 . chapter 1
it was good
| AnimeExpert1981 10/27/12 . chapter 1
Ooh! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
| InnocentDiamond 10/8/12 . chapter 1
SXI would sound interesting, but roses would be better! I told you it was a great idea! So it's Itsuki's turn to be the new kid in town. I understand how he feels because even if you may be friends with Nene & Nono, your friendship was pretty recent. Other people have known each other for years. I'd have a hard time imaging Itsuki's parents though. What?! How could you put Yuuka here?! She's like 28 years old! But it's not that obvious, so nobody cares. Yeah, where I live is pretty foggy in the mornings & evenings. Saya in her kimono reminds me of Hakurei, Reimu from the Touhou series. Now, wouldn't Itsuki be scared to see Saya looking at him? Update soon!