This was too cute!

Okay, I really do love the end of this story. I'm not going to deny that it is sappy, but it is really cute. I love the idea and it makes me want to tell a similar story to my own kids some day. lol I definitely think you should continue if you have an idea!

Well, that was adorable. I love the story that Marshall "filled in." What a beautiful family moment.

And, yes, I would love to see more of this family!

The bit about Abigail's magical cheerfulness cracked me up! Too funny! And, I would love to see more of Norah and Evie! Evie sounds darling, and I love how close she is to Norah. I definitely made my Norah and Alice pretty catty, so it is always nice to read something different!

Bravo...well done! Loved it...awaiting the sequel, please-)

Yes, I'd love to see a sequel with M&M, Norah, and Evie!

Oh, please keep this story going-i'd love to see a sequel! :)

I would be interested in a Sequel

Loved how the girls corrected Marshall's story and how you shared it with Norah telling the story and Marshall adding to it. Norah correcting him on their was more was priceless. Would definitely be great to read more Mary, Marshall, Norah and Evie. Enjoyed the story, thanks for sharing.

Loved it! Epilogue please:)

Love it. Love how everything wasn't whitewashed when they got together. They still have issues to work on, but they both clearly want to work on them.

Definitely need an epilogue. :p

Awwwwww! Super! I hope for an epilogue !
Need more of them together. So nice...

Yay! No more Abigail! And they're together, even if they're not sure where they're headed! They wouldn't be Mary and Marshall if they weren't a little bit rocky, and it's nice to see Marshall have a vulnerable side. I always write him as being so in control, but you give him a different color and I like it!

Ack! I can't believe I waited so long to read/review and that I missed a shout-out at the end! I am so sorry! Yes, you do love Seth and you write the best scenes with he and Marshall! I am not always as skilled at working him into my stories; he's either there or he isn't LOL! But, I love how Seth is able to get Marshall to sit down and talk here, and to make a choice.

Liked how Mary and Marshall were in opposite roles for the relationship issue. I can see Marshall wanting to be cautious. Abigail going back to Texas is a good thing. Hope you do an epilogue. If not enjoyed the story. Thanks for sharing.