I would very much like to see more

You did a bit of a wrong thing by putting two people speaking at the same time in one paragrapgh, this would have been really good except for that mistake. Anyways here is some soothing music for you.

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Interesting on the use of a journal, keep up the good work.

Interesting start, it's going to be interesting to see where this goes.