| Reviews for The beggining of the end |
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Detective Vinci 5/11/13 . chapter 5The only way I could love this story more is if it were longer. You've made an incredible job to not stop reading. The action scenes are very good, enough details to imagine it and fast enough. I thought you played on safe with Magnus not being very harmed or furious on Kurt, but luckily that changed when Magnus was bekng arrested. (Though the whole orange suit in prison without a trail was going to fast). If everyone could get so easily an excuse for murdering someone... None the less, I loved it. I found the Avengers link amusint. Green eyes and black hair, Silvertongue, it's all on you, tall... Would you make me the happiest person and (this is maybe/not what you might expect) make another of these lovely stories. I have no words to decribe them. Do I? Fabulous, amazing, adorable, lovely, breath-taking, incredible... |
SilvertonguedClotpole 11/19/12 . chapter 5This was a really good read. I don't think there are enough Wallander fics out there, and especially very few with Magnus. I like ones where Magnus is hurt (i know I'm bad) and so this one was a nice surprise, even if it was only for a short time. :) |
Alek34 11/10/12 . chapter 5Loved it! :) |
Leia 10/31/12 . chapter 1 This is really good so far, but you might need to have it checked by a Beta next time. There are a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes and it's sometime hard to tell which character is saying what. Apart from that, the story itself is very good. I'm a bit confused over the part with Magnus in the car on the way to interview Sarah. You wrote: ' He looked at Kurt, worried about the abrupt stop. Had he figured out?...His boss hadn't found out'. Found out what? Sorry if that's a bit of a dumb question. I'm going to read chapter two, there might be some clues in there :) |
Loki'd in 221b 10/21/12 . chapter 1It's a good fic, but I've read a lot of these lines in another fic :/ |
Mibbles610 10/18/12 . chapter 5 OMG I loved this ending! And it's very refreshing to find someone who actually FINISHES their stories ;) love the avengers reference btw and this was an AWESOME story; you should totally keep writing. |
Terra3434 10/17/12 . chapter 5I really like this story :) keep up the good work. update soon |
I.Am.Cheese.And.Cheese.Is.Me 10/15/12 . chapter 5Was that an Avengers refernce I saw in there, cause I think it was. Anysways, LOVES IT LOTS! Many gold stars for you. |
SteamPunk'93 10/15/12 . chapter 5Well this is a cool ending! Magnypus had to talk Sarah down and save Kurt. I liked that. I also liked Magnus revealing his past to connect with her. I don't really care that it didn't work as it showed that Magnus really did understand her pain. I also like that Kurt was quiet and let Magnus talk. And I loved Magnus's witty line, "Beacuse she was, like, really devious. I hope you write more Wallander fics in the future. The world needs more fics about Magnus Martinsson. |
Guest 10/15/12 . chapter 5 Avengers references hahahahaha... Good job! :) |
SteamPunk'93 10/10/12 . chapter 4Okay! Interesting twists. I am glade that Magnus is NOT the murderer. Given how injured he is and probaly isn't armed, I am keen to see how Magnus is going to save Kurt. Are we going to meet Magnus's sister? Because that could be cool! Magnus was pretty sweet in this chapter. I am glade that after Kurt was made to go speak to Magnus he came to his senses and trusted Magnus. This tall Australian guy, is he likely to reappear in a later chapter of this fic? Because as an Australian myself, I will be interested to see if any Assie phases appear and are used within appropriate contexts! I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter so keep writing! |
I.Am.Cheese.And.Cheese.Is.Me 10/10/12 . chapter 4Loves it a lot! Was not expecting that at the end! At all. Cannot wait for more! XD XD XD |
Eeyore08 10/10/12 . chapter 3What!? I wasn't expecting that. What has Magnus been up to? Please don't leave us hanging for long, update soon. |
I.Am.Cheese.And.Cheese.Is.Me 10/10/12 . chapter 3OMFG THIS IS AMAZING I LOVE IT |
XArtemisX 10/9/12 . chapter 3chapter 4! chapter 4! chapter 4! chapter 4! chapter 4! chapter 4! chapter 4! chapter 4! chapter 4! chapter 4! |