|Reviews for Dancing in the Shadows|
| Guest 5/18/13 . chapter 7
Yeay! Next chap smut is back! XD great chapter...
The end was really funny, Cass messing up with Akali.
| kapuis 5/20/13 . chapter 7
In the previous chapter, I wonder if we go to see the units of Noxus and Iona more dangerous than Akali and Kat.
I like the fact that Akali realizes that she and Kat are similar, they love killed.
I wonder if the disease in the institute will have an importance in your story.
I appreciate the interactions between Lux and Kat and also the end, the reaction of Kat to Garen (is Garen jealous?).
I like the discussion with Tryndamere and the reaction of Akali, it is not passive.
In fact I find that the plan of Kat is strange, she wants to capture Akali so that she obeys at the High Command of Noxia, but in this case her order would make everything to get back her and that could make problems with Iona and the summoner.
In any case I like really the sentence: " It was here that her plan was solidified and she would be forced to carry on towards the end, soldiering onward until the goal of a better Noxus was within her grasp, be it at Akali's side or holding the chain around her neck"
The moment which I prefer is the end with Cass's jealousy, it is great, realistic and returned well, there are really interesting things to develop top. I hope for a confrontation between Cass and Akali and perhaps a quarrel with her sister.
I like the fact that Kat fall more and more in love with Akali.
I look really forward to read the next chapter.
| kapuis 5/20/13 . chapter 6
I like the thought of Kat, she is in character and at the end, she is up for the challenge. I like the fact that we learn more on the power in Noxian. I wonder what is the plan of Kat ? Control Akali?
I like the confrontation between Akali and her brothers, the discussion is interesting and their attitude is realistic. I wonder how Akali's mother will react, I am impatient to see it.
The master is an interesting characters, I think that he is a noxian, perhaps a member of the High Command or the Black Rose. If he wasn't a man, I would think that the master is Leblanc.
| Guest 5/15/13 . chapter 7
Love the chapter! Worth the wait. It's actually rare to find some good fluffy stuff here, but that's just me I guess. I've been following this story for a while now, and I just thought I'd write a review to show you my support and keep you writing. I'll be expecting more updates soon!
| Silentx32 5/17/13 . chapter 7
Cass? Jealous of Akali? Now that's an interesting twist. It's crazy how it seems that both are affecting each other in different ways maybe Akali was right when she was talking about yin and yang.
Thanks again for another great read its always a pleasure.
| Turkey in a suit 5/15/13 . chapter 7
The chapter title sounds so promising. I really, really want to read the next chapter now D:
I really like the sisterly interactions between Cass and Kat, though hopefully Cass won't become blinded by jealousy and do something rash. And "condemn to an unlife", I've got a bad feeling about this.
Also, one of the main highlights of the chapter:
Awesome smut is awesome.
| Schadenfreude555 5/15/13 . chapter 7
Don't tell me Cass of all people is going to betray Kat...
| Kuroui 5/14/13 . chapter 7
Well, that was certainly interesting.
So from what I gather, you've interpreted Kayle's lore in a way that she's 'serving' the League right? And not just on the Fields, she works with and under the commands of the Summoners?
This 'Shadow' disease - quite a fitting name by the way - is either one of the these things. 1) Super deadly and would throw the people into panic should they find out what it really is. 2) Is a weapon of biological warfare, 3) (Though this one is more of a joke) Creates symptoms which are VERY VERY embarrasing.
Either way the people will lose trust in the Summoners - or rather have lost MORE trust in the Summoners as they aren't exactly the most liked people in Valoran.
Did I mention I hate Garen? In game, out of game? In game I'm just like "STOP WITH UR FRIGGIN SPINNING" and "LEAVE ME ALONEEEEE!"
*cough* Anyyyway, Garen's such an ass. 'Demacia this, Demacia that. Noxus is evil. Noxians always have an motive' Though that last part has yet to be proven false. Kat's retort was... Vulgar and amusing to read. Just imagining the dumbstruck look on Garen's face cracks me up.
Mm this is outa order but now time to talk about Lux. She's right to fear Kat, but such a... Strong negative reaction is bad. I like Lux even if she's so damn annoying with the slows and the snares and that sniping laser of hers. (IMA FIRING MA LASAAAA XD LOL) She seems really innocent but I think she's be pretty open minded the only problem being Garen controling her life. Well this is Lux's first real appearance so I can't say much about your character development of her just yet - so far though I like it. GJ
Awww poor jealous Cassie. Kat still loves you! Its a shame, they seem to be getting along well and Kat seems like she's really falling for Akali, but since they plan to ruin her life... Well damn. Well that is IF they go through with it.
Little family moments between Kat and Cass like that warm my heart. Cass being jealous and what was it - two chapters ago when Kat felt really protective of Cass. Its a nice turn from regularly portrayed cold-blooded Noxian killers.
Mmm anything else? ... Ah the Ionians! I know Irelia's life was messed up by Noxus so I wonder how she'll react since Akali is her friend and all. Shen and Kennen already know but... Will they see through her facade of 'balance' and realize she's fallen for the red head? Fallen HARD at that. Karma and Soraka seem like the understanding types but then again, its Kat so... That will be interesting.
Ah speaking of people's reactions, loved the moment between Trynd, Ashe, Kat and Akali. Personally I don't ship TryndxAshe and think of it as the whole 'political' marriage thing. I love the way Akali shot an insult at Trynd, it was funny and I liked the way he reacted to it. Ashe seemed totally fine with their relationship, she's awesome like that (Love Ashe! Fav Champ). If only others would react that well.
As for those that I DO ship. I ship AsheKat (Thank you SilverofSouls, that fanfic Wounded is amazing!) And thanks the fic Passage of the Twin Disciples by... Damn I forgot his/her name, but its a NidaxAkali story so I started shipping that.
Overall this was a good chapter, especially liked the latter half. Keep up the amazing work, and like you asked I'll keep these detailed reviews. Oh and Quality over Quantity - no rush! Work on your own time and make the story how you wish, its better to have less chapters with wondeful content than a bunch of chapters that are 'meh' or bad. GJ Soul!
| Veks 5/14/13 . chapter 7
Your writting style is simply perfect, maybe Katarina is swearing a lil too much? I don't know honestly, might just be me but apart from that I really have nothing else to say, apart from what everybody else comments with; keep going!
| Smelly Cat 5/12/13 . chapter 6
we gonna have to wait 40 days again? *-*
Love your story... cant wait for next chapter xP
| Igotswag 4/25/13 . chapter 6
This chapter is well made,i cant wait for the next ones.
Also,make Shen have some "less harder"moments with Akali,just to show the strong link between them.
| From Dust to Ashes 4/27/13 . chapter 6
Hot damn this is good. Read the whole thing in a flash. Can't wait for more!
Dust to Ashes
| Silentx32 4/26/13 . chapter 6
What a brutal chapter for Akali it's a miracle she was able to keep her cool. I have a faint idea of who are those two figures in the end but I doubt I'm right :P.
Amazing work like always and thanks for the update it was a great read.
| noobsdog 4/25/13 . chapter 6
Nice story. Thankyou for writing :)
| Toolazytologin 4/22/13 . chapter 6
God this story keeps getting better and better. I am kinda sad i read it already because now I need to wait for the next update (hopefully not a month T_T). I like how you are portraying shen and ninja pickachu because they show how they care about Akali but also stay in character and don't just simply brush off how she lied to them. Please don't just rush the next chapter just to get it early, I think all of us here prefer quality over quantity and i don't want to see this fic suffer just because you want to get it out early (This does not mean that I am not impatient for the next chapter). Now all we need is to post this on the forums and hope riot makes it cannon XD, seriously this pairing is wayyyyyy better than GarenXKat (That is not saying much, but part of that might be my great hate against garen). It would be fun to see Garen making a move on Kat and Akali getting all possesive or jealous.
Anyways, great chapter and more importantly: WE NEED HOT AkaliXKat ACTION ASAP!(maybe something involving Kitty Kat Katarina?)