I really like it. Wish your chapters were longer.

Its so refreshing to have ems stand up for herself in this chapter, and I cant wait to see how things turn out with her and naomi. Im hoping that she doesnt get back with naomi. (at least not for a long time).

love this story, but I hurts my heart to read! on one hand I'm thinking yes go Emily you tell her and on the other hand I wanna hug naomi! heartbreakly good keep it up love it! hope we might see happy naomi at some point :D

ouch.. :S

I'm hooked on this really want to see where you will take it.

I love your story, Update soon :)

Great start! Can't wait for more! :)

Great chapter! Its lovely to see Cook as a kind natured guy. Cant wait to read more

two words: me gusta

Aaawwww noooo ! :( ahahaa great chapter dude. Oh man if you put Mandy into this story, i'll shit myself ! lmfao anyways can't wait until the next one

I feel the pain ! Oh the pain xD Note: try not to always repeat names. Naomi, Naomi,Emily, Emily. Do what you did with "shattered little red head" you know ? Maybe ? Anyways yeah great job, can't wait until the next :)

I like how this is starting :) umm one question, are you going to go beyond the end of series 4 ? or like kind of follow it ? or make it your own way and like continue ? ... you know ? lmfao anyways yeah good first chapter

This is brillant.

Hey, just came across your fic. Its brilliant, cant wait to read more. Emily fan right here too!