I like backstory, so naturally this story grabbed me. I don't really have anything bad to say about it; it's fun, easy to read and to the point.

Your story is so nice! *-* I really like it, hope you update it soon!

"Oh, you're dirty." I pretty much died right there - Hanso clearly needs to brush up a bit on his understanding of proper social etiquette, considering how most of us probably came to the same original conclusion as Brynn apparently did. Or maybe he does understand social etiquette, and just needs to accept that she won't be as willing to ignore it as he is, heheh.

Definitely following - this is a good, fun little start to your story, and I'm curious to see where it goes from here.