I really like it and others do too you really should keep writing!

Man i wish you never stopped this one:( i really like this one. i just read the whole thing and it was a really great story. i alao have read your other storyies. they are really good too. welll can't wait for updayes of one day at a time:)!

Sorry to see it go but, it was fun while it lasted.

im sad it over but to be honest I barelay (spelled it wrong) remember how this story went so yeah...

Where is chapter14, and I thought that Loren moved in with Eddie?

KEEP WRITING!

This fan fiction sucks ass, all of it. You have no idea how to write about how loren and eddie are, you are completely out of character. You suck ass. You should quit, just quit.

I think your story should go on, but eventually you will probablyy have to atleast imply an intimate relationship lol. i will think of ideas and get back to ya, i like ian with mel i always thought they should get together

I for one do not want you to stop writing this story. I like it very much. And now that it looks like Ian and Mel will be a couple. I would love to see what happens with them. As long as Eddie and Loren are together it really doesn't matter to me what they are doing. So write this story the way it is comfortable for you. Just please don't stop writing this story. I know there is all kinds of stuff that the four of them can do together that would make for a good story.

You are right, you aren't a good writer, not trying to be mean, but good job for your first time

Why did you write loren SO needy!?

Wow. Tyler is alittle intense, kidnapping is a no no.

Loved the ending i was dying it was cute cant wait for next one

I love this story & wat a twist(:

REALLY GOOD!