|Reviews for Earworm|
| CommChatter 1/7/13 . chapter 1
Pretty good. I like it
| Dorian Windslasher 10/10/12 . chapter 1
Though her mother sat high on the scale set for humans, her sisters were good enough to take on the laws involving sex with her 15 year old sister and make anyone jump at her 25 year old.
That sentence makes no sense. I also have problems with the writing of the characters. It just doesn't feel like Harry.
Last but not least. Can White Court vampires really get fat unless they really, really work on it? Thomas looks like a greek God without ever working out. I've just got a bit of a problem with that. Unless the sentence which I did not understand was a reference to sexual abuse, the girl's mostly whining.
"Oh, nobody loves me because I'm overweight and my sisters are so pretty."
Well, then try running. I agree that boys that age are borderline retarded, goodness knows I was, but it's not really like she has proper issues.
Look at Harry and compare. His father died when he was a kid. His adopted father was a psycopath. His first love seemingly betrayed him. His second love was turned into a vampire, more or less.
| Ziggelly 10/9/12 . chapter 1
Awww... this was gorgeous. Truly gorgeous.
Why the "M" rating, though? O.o