Wow ;)

I really love this story. It is very emotional, and it would be interesting to read about Daisy and Peach's relationship from a different angle. Please, keep up.

Oh, and you might have mistaken chapter ten and nine.

Plz continue great story

This is sad :(

But the plot is great so far, keep it up!

Aww i feel bad for peach and daisy plz update soon

aaaw, soooo cute. :) I really like it! The end is so sweet! The only thing I'd add is that the last line there should be the start of a new paragraph.

wooow, interesting! I looks like this is going to be a very exciting story! I like the idea of how Peach and Daisy are sisters and its so cute. There are a few spelling mistakes. Just run it through spell-check and it'll be fixed. Also, sometimes the sentances are a little jerky, but I think a smoother style comes with time. Keep on writing! I like your story and can't wait to see what happens next.