Oh, dear...this was so sweet! I really appreaciated for writing this. Cloud and Claire are my favorite FF couple and story like this is hard to find.
A really warm thanks, and my congratulations about your writing. You are awesome! Your expression, the dialogues, make the scenes alive, the descriptions! O cried when Claire went into a hospital, when Cloud made his best to take care of their baby, and how much he loved her.
Eda was so swwet too! The scene with the jacket left me completely shocked (with the good meaning of course!) Indeed, children are the archors for their mothers' lives.
I really hope you will write more stories about the couple! Will we see you again?