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| Reviews for Lost and Found |
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   GHfan110 10/23/12 . chapter 10Great story - I really liked how you told it from the character's point of view. |
| may7fic 10/20/12 . chapter 10 Loved how much lightness you gave us in this final chapter. It was a lovely way to finish the story :) |
| Vinsmouse 10/19/12 . chapter 10 Perfect wrap-up, loved Guthrie's essay, that was funny. Mouse |
| cag45 10/19/12 . chapter 10 Oh that was so good! I love the insight from Adam's POV about their parents. The McFadden Island rules was really great, very creative. I really enjoyed this chapter as well as the rest of the story. Thank you for sharing it! |
| may7fic 10/18/12 . chapter 9 Lovely backstory you introduced here and I think you did a great job with Daniel. Loved the brotherly banter and interraction, especially between him and Adam and with Crane. |
| Vinsmouse 10/17/12 . chapter 9 I see Daniel decided to tell you enough to write the chapter. ;) Good job with it, so glad Tim's parents let them know about the heart condition. Maybe now they can let go of any residual guilt they've been feeling. Cute touch with the lamb and Crane's quip about the donkey made me laugh. :) Mouse |
| cag45 10/17/12 . chapter 9 Oh, that was the best chapter yet. It was so sweet and poignant. I would have written Daniel the same way and I absolutely adore how you wrote each family member in this chapter. Beautiful! |
| Vinsmouse 10/16/12 . chapter 8 That was incredibly touching and so very, very well written. The emotion just flows off the page as I'm reading. Loved the letter, perfect way for Adam to get his feelings out about his parents. Well done. Mouse |
| cag45 10/16/12 . chapter 8 Very nice chapter. I enjoyed this very much. Thanks for posting! |
| Vinsmouse 10/15/12 . chapter 7 Sorry to hear about your concussion but it doesn't seem to have ruined your ability to write. ;) Wonderful chapter, have to feel sorry for Tim's parents even if we all saw it coming. Looking forward to more. Mouse P.S. Tell your co-worker skillets are meant for recalcitrant husbands and other males. |
| may7fic 10/15/12 . chapter 7 Lovely sweet chapter. |
| cag45 10/15/12 . chapter 7 Aww, that was such a beautiful chapter and worth the wait. I hope you are on the mend and am so sorry to hear about your accident! My goodness! I guess real h/c and angst happens in our real lives too! |
| Vinsmouse 10/13/12 . chapter 6 That was great! Tough growing up, good thing Evan has older brothers who have been there, done that. ;) |
| Guest 10/13/12 . chapter 6 Lovely, warm moments and as always your dialogue was terrific. Such sad news about Tim though, if not unexpected. |
| cag45 10/13/12 . chapter 6 Wow, this is a great chapter. I love getting everyone's perspective on Hannah. Really cool how you are approaching the story. Very nice job! |
