Something about the words: 'The Beginner's Guide to Loompish, by Willy Wonka', makes me giggle with delight, for far longer than I should. Please continue this story!

loved the plot and excellent writting. cant wait to see the next incident please update fast

excellent story. loved it...

Love it!

I hope you continue soon, I really like this story. I hope this time she remembers not to wear high heels in the factory.

i loveeeeeeeeeee the movie and i love willy wonkaaaaaa it s the first charlie and ... fic im readig it s amazing . thank you

Very good! Wow, hard to create a new language. Thanks for giving us more on Clarity's background through the dream.

ERMAGERD I LERV ERT!

Love the story, please keep writing, I am addicted to it!
-dr g

Thank you for continuing! I love how nervous she was being left alone with Willie to walk to the lobby. He must like her, walking her to the door from the Bucket house rather than disappearing. After all, how many people have a boss who walks them out of the factory every day! I also loved the package and letter. That was very sweet. I can't wait to see her attempts to learn loompish!

Omg, wonderful!
Never have I ever been so excited to read something!
-dr g
Keep writing!

I love this story very much so far. It is creative and sweet-not overly gross like some other Willy Wonka/OC stories. So, know that you are doing great. Secondly, about that writer's block. If you really like this story, and don't want anyone to adopt it, which I hope doesn't happen, you can get people to send in chapter ideas. You are doing great- I really don't think you should rewrite this-maybe you should just slow the relationship between Willy and the OC. Good luck!

Hey,what if you wrote the next chapter by milking the conversation between Clarity and Grandpa Joe at the dinner table?Add Willy here and there!It sould come out as great as your other chapters!

I like this intuitive comment you've written for Grandma Georgina: "You're really going to like it here. You're just made for a place like this." She nods at me and I smile.
She's always so accurate.

I like Willy's comment, too. "Believe me, it's more uncomfortable for me than it is for you."

I wonder what Willie and Mrs. Bucket were arguing about in the elevator. Did she think he was purposefully making Clarity fall on him? Thank goodness for Grandpa Joe!