Lol, Jo shipping Beth with Prof Bhaer...what a wild idea, though I can totally see Jo going there in her denial...good stuff, please keep writing!

I can't wait to see what comes next! Keep on writing!

Very sweet, without being sappy. I like your take on this story.

Charming story and quite intriguing! Please continue.

This is remarkably good, especially chapter two! The tone is very much in keeping with the original novel. I'm looking forward to seeing what you'll do with this. Beth is so perceptive, and Jo and her little romances from her point of view is very interesting.

Wonderful start - I love Beth, so am happy to see this story. Please update soon :)

Wow! Very good! I loved how well you wrote the charachter's lines...expecially the doctor's-I would've written something stupid! Haha! Please add more chapters!

This is really good, I hope that you'll continue...