nice story ^^

Hey Cool FanFic. Interesting turn of events, lol Xello's son lol, well Continue soon! I'm looking foward to read more!!

Don't flake out write more!SOON!

I'm not sure how I feel about Xellos having a son. I honestly never thought about him reproducing. But your story is well written.

this story is nice! do you mind continuing it along with your other slayers story "Real Family"?

i also like you to be included in the staff of the c2 community i've set up-ed about Lina since you write great stories about her?

would you pls? continue and join? i'll respect what ever you decide? but pls do finish the stories pls.

gud luck writing

This is cool so far. Please write more of this series!

I really love it!please continue this fic!

I loved it! Now all you have to do is FINISH IT!!!

GOOD fics! And I mean plural! ^_^ Please keep writing. I love your renditions of the cast. Especially Amelia 'bullying' Zel. Please write more soon.

Wow what a cool idea for a story. I can't wait until the next chapter. Keep up the great work.

Hey, come on! You have to hurry and write another chapter! ^^

mwaar! ...I love it so far! Write more! Please! ^^

Ah, so here's where you've been hiding! Guess it's silly of me to hover over the Kenshin board lookin' for ya, eh? Anyway, cool! Xelloss has a kid who's almost as big of a pain as Xelloss is! And I love the narrations for Lina and Zelgadis. This is yet another one of your fics that I will be sure to keep an eye on!

Wow, this is a fun story so far! I hope to see more.

I love this fic! You write really well! I hope you write more and continue soon! I like exclamtion points, don't I?