  Xelis Metallium 8/7/02 . chapter 2 OOOOOO! I LIKE! I REALLY REALLY LIKE! FINISH IT PA-WEEEEEEEEZE! |
| Sil 8/2/02 . chapter 2 Wow! This is really good. (Not that any of your stories are less than wonderful..._) I like the fact that Zel doesn't know everything and that her has a little competition with the appearance of the Black Fox. ...Anyway, keep up the good work! |
 iNsAnE nO bAkA 8/1/02 . chapter 2Love it! Please continue this fic! |
| Calophi 7/29/02 . chapter 2 Everyone is so wonderfully in character, and the story is well thought out. You will write more, because I said so. _ |
| Rune Simbriant 7/21/02 . chapter 1 Hasn't anybody else reviewed this yet? This is pretty good I think. Come on. More! |
| Miko no Yume 7/21/02 . chapter 1 Wow! This fic is really good. You've done a great job developing the plot, and its very well written. I really liked the first 2 parts. Hope you plan on updating soon! |
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