Very good, and it has a flow to it I like. A lot, actually. If you could write more on this, I'd like it. A lot. Thanks

Please write more if you get around to it. The title echoes my response to this chapter. Damn.

1Summertime Sadness1 here, not logged in! I really liked this, it was written wonderfully and had a really nice...well, ring to it almost. I honestly enjoyed reading this, you have a great promise as an author!